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SLPdomain [2009-06-14 17:59:45 +0000 UTC]

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Hmmmmmmmmm....
while I do like the lighting. and that hue of the sunlight does create a very nostalgic vibe--this photo---has me tilting my head like a dog confused.
while u mention this as being of the 'summer ' series...it feels more like a pre-winter shot.
While the composition is right on--the elbow in the foreground---just knocks the composition off. Its intrusive and does nothing for the film like quality that this moment presents.
The tones of the subject---come off too red for me...that is totally my own thoughts.
what would i do to change this?
I would opt to crop this from the left side of the mans zipper--yup--halving him---so that the one eye on ya...or towards the viewer---adds some mystery--while i know it will seem odd in diameter then--as the square format works good for this...
I wouldn't be happy with this--for myself...as is.

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Chris2Balls [2010-12-04 16:03:15 +0000 UTC]

have you heard of beat streuli?

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Da-Ri-Na [2010-06-14 09:38:20 +0000 UTC]

guy will kill ya if you shoot him again

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alice-liz [2009-06-26 00:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I don't know anything about photography, so my comment is going to be... simple.

I like it, because it makes me feel warm and it makes me remember those really cold days, but the sun is shining.

And I think this photo is great, because it wasn't... made: you just took it. I think.
^^

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yv [2009-06-16 21:03:01 +0000 UTC]

that's cool, really dynamic somehow.

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de-JTC [2009-06-16 20:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Ich finde dieses Bild ziemlich gut.
Es zeigt einmal mehr die Skepsis der meisten Menschen gegenüber der Street Fotografie.
Das Licht ist super genutzt und kommt auch gut raus.
Ich würde lediglich einen höheren Kontrast nutzen, da das Bild in den dunklen Teilen durch das Gegenlicht etwas zu flau wird.
Einziger Störfaktor für mich ist der Arm unten links, der den Frame etwas "destabilisiert".
Street ist eine schöne Sache! Mach auf jeden Fall weiter damit. Gut bist du ja

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DrugArt [2009-06-15 06:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Hi there,
You've been featured in my latest journal
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Misantropia [2009-06-14 14:27:36 +0000 UTC]

I like the way you captured him looking at you.
Nice tone and light.

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damien-c [2009-06-14 09:24:45 +0000 UTC]

You were so caught here!

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GZB [2009-06-13 21:51:38 +0000 UTC]

1. kolor lepiej mi tu gra
2. pan ma tarcze strategicznie umiejscowiona. sam sie prosi zeby cos sie stalo zaraz ;] ta tarcza dorabia jakas historie do zdjecia.

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duo [2009-06-13 20:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Very cool. I love the glow of the sun in the background.

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synconi [2009-06-13 19:24:45 +0000 UTC]

So serious, eyes just glancing in our direction as the sunlight streams in and makes all the rest anonymous with its warmth.

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shenanigan87 [2009-06-13 18:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Completely different atmosphere than the previous one... Gone is all the tension, replaced by mild curiosity, or so it seems.

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inObrAS [2009-06-13 15:11:15 +0000 UTC]

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adni18 [2009-06-13 10:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Summer in the city? I see all of them dressed for cold! Strange

Cool photo Chris!

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siscanin [2009-06-13 09:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Great series to friend

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