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Published: 2008-07-29 04:14:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Robin, sweet robin,
Sing your sweet song,
Let it fall lightly
And right every wrong.

Your song will weave through
The branches of trees
And melt away winter
And summon the bees.

Summer will come
And dance through the trees,
She’ll dance to your song
As you sing on the breeze.

Robin, sweet robin,
Your winter was long,
I know, I was there,
I missed your sweet song.

But you opened your heart
And started to sing,
You let your song soar,
And brought on the spring.

Spring precedes summer,
And your summer will stay,
And winter won’t come
To darken your day.

Your song is the sweetest
I’m ever to hear,
In the years on this earth
That I’ll spend with you near.
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Comments: 6

phoenixfosho [2008-08-20 06:08:45 +0000 UTC]

cute (dare i say cuddly?) poem

definitely a fav, i love the feel you give with this one, it just cant be beat. Not quite a song, but not quite a poem, it's a definite connection between the narrator and the robin, and the upbeat tone of the poem got me going

great job

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Ghost47 In reply to phoenixfosho [2008-08-20 13:15:02 +0000 UTC]

haha cuddly... lol. thank you very much for your kind words

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greenfinch22 [2008-07-29 04:21:47 +0000 UTC]

I love it, you are amazing. Thank you sooo muucchhh but I have to disagree with the ending and tell you that YOU'RE song is the sweetest i'm ever to hear.

Beautiful job, thank you my dear

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Ghost47 In reply to greenfinch22 [2008-07-29 04:24:55 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

but i should drive over and slap you for that your/you're mistake.

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greenfinch22 In reply to Ghost47 [2008-07-29 04:27:58 +0000 UTC]

BAH!! you know i never do that...yikes! shame on mee! YOUR song is the sweetest im ever to hear** oopsie

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Ghost47 In reply to greenfinch22 [2008-07-29 04:28:53 +0000 UTC]

hahaha that's right! still lurve youuu

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