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PolarAnemone [2016-12-06 10:46:08 +0000 UTC]
How true. Incredible work.
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AlwaysTheFlawedOne [2015-08-30 21:04:46 +0000 UTC]
This is very interesting. I liked the words you chose because it makes you think. I like poetry that isn't dumbed down. Great job on this. A fav for sure!
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oviedomedina [2015-08-25 22:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Came here thanks to ´s feature.
Boy am I glad I did: This is QUALITY work.
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Hydrogenuine [2015-08-19 20:00:20 +0000 UTC]
This is just beyond stellar. Instant favourite.
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AlwaysTheFlawedOne [2015-08-19 09:00:51 +0000 UTC]
My god. This is really good. You have a firm grasp on words. I really like this. I would never think of ways of putting together words like you can.
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LiliWrites [2015-08-19 03:37:19 +0000 UTC]
Outstanding!
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ghostinafog In reply to LiliWrites [2015-08-19 06:10:08 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i'm honoured to hear that from you :3
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RaucousRavens [2015-08-18 19:01:12 +0000 UTC]
God this is crazy good
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Jade-Pandora [2015-08-18 12:39:58 +0000 UTC]
Well done, Jonathan!
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Lintu47 [2015-08-18 09:06:58 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!
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doughboycafe [2015-04-16 10:57:52 +0000 UTC]
I really liked it. I am not sure I get all of it, but that definitely isn't due to the writing. I am guessing it is about space and how it is so scary and beautiful - astronauts went up, something happened, they never came back, public outraged, scientist cannot explain why it happened? Am I reading it right?
Here is something I couldn't puzzle out but interested me greatly - why the mention of the megalithic pigeon and the mastadon heart? I get that it is a juxtaposition between something incredibly old and this new space frontier, and all the new science, but what did you want to say by putting them in there? Sorry, again this is no fault in your writing. I am just the person that likes reading poetry because I like beautiful words together, but I am not very well studied in it and so I don't always know how to read it.
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Cole-y [2015-04-15 00:58:55 +0000 UTC]
my life goals: find another combination of words as good as 'megalithic pigeon'
this is superb. you're superb
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chromeantennae [2015-04-14 05:50:51 +0000 UTC]
so glad to see you here omg <3
and this is phenomenal c:
and AyeAye12 already told ye about the glitch squad so i don't have to now haha
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ghostinafog In reply to chromeantennae [2015-04-14 17:15:48 +0000 UTC]
aww you guys are too sweet <3
i missed this place :3
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gliitchlord [2015-04-14 05:08:42 +0000 UTC]
good to have you here, g
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Stenkuss [2015-04-13 18:18:14 +0000 UTC]
Pretty interesting concept. Halfway through reading I thought that it was more or less tackling the fear that comes with the unknown frontier of space. It is really cool.
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ghostinafog In reply to Stenkuss [2015-04-13 23:21:51 +0000 UTC]
space is the scariest/coolest thing in the world
thanks :3
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Stenkuss In reply to ghostinafog [2015-04-13 23:30:17 +0000 UTC]
Learned that from space odyssey. P.S. Gravity sucks
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AyeAye12 [2015-04-13 12:35:04 +0000 UTC]
OH HELLO I JUST POSTED A MESSAGE THAT I MISSED YOU xP
Great to see you back. How are you doing? The break has done you good; wonderful piece.
me and gliitchlord accidentally started a experimental collective for NaPo over at gliitchmonth you're more than welcome to join
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