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Description the astronauts never returned and neither did the news
in my hands i fold a megalithic pigeon
the take-home message is: the cosmos is a cold dead bitch
as you sleep under magazines, waiting for nothing.

in the shackles of a sterilized den, there's an actual
mastodon heart, pale and glassy pink, icy film
tightened like a fist;  - and the scientists despair:
   it's the morning of the opening,
then the few slashes of paralyzing waves.

like a sign we'd make when we were younger, a way to disarm
a bandit, or a preacher
                or the oncoming horde of space invaders.
but the drawings you sent to venus never returned,
 and now the crack,
          and the scientists at a loss before the angered public.

they release a report that states that the floodgates opened
        by themselves, that the valves erode
like the chalky sand that will swirl and hiss
           in the crater where once hid the laboratory,

that we're watching the tender stalks nipped
                     in a glass cage of language.
and no greenhouse can account for the atrocity we receive.

i infer that the answer to what's that noise is always silence,
you will recognize it in the fire alarm that wakes you up.
there is no text on the mess of paper that falls
from my hands into the orbit; but you wait for it,
                                    wait.
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Comments: 48

PolarAnemone [2016-12-06 10:46:08 +0000 UTC]

How true. Incredible work.

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AlwaysTheFlawedOne [2015-08-30 21:04:46 +0000 UTC]

This is very interesting. I liked the words you chose because it makes you think. I like poetry that isn't dumbed down. Great job on this. A fav for sure!

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Ag-Cat [2015-08-30 03:52:23 +0000 UTC]

There's something that I really like about the last two lines.

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Lintu47 [2015-08-27 23:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Hello
You have been featured here  My Daily Deviation Highlights        I was tagged by Astarsia and Minato-Kushina to take part in this wonderful project and i am more than happy to join in. I would like to invite everyone who sees this to also get involved and spread the word about it
Below i will share the info given by the initiator of this project, Mrs-Durden.
        Welcome to a Community Volunteer project in which we will be highlighting our favourite Daily Deviations featured within the recent weeks! We would like to encourage the community to join in on this project by simply going through the Daily Deviations page and collecting some of their favourite pieces of art within a journal titled "My Daily Deviation Highlights"! We hope this project will help spread awareness and love for Daily Deviations and our fellow deviant artists!
Use the hashtag 
Have a nice day!

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oviedomedina [2015-08-25 22:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Came here thanks to ´s feature.
Boy am I glad I did: This is QUALITY work.

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ghostinafog In reply to oviedomedina [2015-08-28 09:19:56 +0000 UTC]

aww,  thank you for the kind words!

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Hydrogenuine [2015-08-19 20:00:20 +0000 UTC]

This is just beyond stellar. Instant favourite.

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ghostinafog In reply to Hydrogenuine [2015-08-28 09:19:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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AlwaysTheFlawedOne [2015-08-19 09:00:51 +0000 UTC]

My god. This is really good. You have a firm grasp on words. I really like this. I would never think of ways of putting together words like you can.

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ghostinafog In reply to AlwaysTheFlawedOne [2015-08-28 09:19:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i'm honoured to hear that 

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LindArtz [2015-08-19 07:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your DD!  

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ghostinafog In reply to LindArtz [2015-08-28 09:18:36 +0000 UTC]

thank ye:3

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LiliWrites [2015-08-19 03:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Outstanding!

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ghostinafog In reply to LiliWrites [2015-08-19 06:10:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i'm honoured to hear that from you :3

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Lissomer [2015-08-18 22:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations!!! I love this piece so much.

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ghostinafog In reply to Lissomer [2015-08-19 06:09:45 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you

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RaucousRavens [2015-08-18 19:01:12 +0000 UTC]

God this is crazy good

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ghostinafog In reply to RaucousRavens [2015-08-19 06:09:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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AyeAye12 [2015-08-18 14:02:39 +0000 UTC]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CONGRATS ON THE DD! 

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ghostinafog In reply to AyeAye12 [2015-08-19 06:09:11 +0000 UTC]

meowcho gracias, amigo

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Jade-Pandora [2015-08-18 12:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Well done, Jonathan! 

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ghostinafog In reply to Jade-Pandora [2015-08-19 06:08:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i appreciate it :3

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Lintu47 [2015-08-18 09:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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ghostinafog In reply to Lintu47 [2015-08-19 06:06:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you! :3

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Lintu47 In reply to ghostinafog [2015-08-19 09:38:38 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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palaeochannel6 [2015-04-17 08:50:23 +0000 UTC]

dude

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doughboycafe [2015-04-16 10:57:52 +0000 UTC]

I really liked it. I am not sure I get all of it, but that definitely isn't due to the writing. I am guessing it is about space and how it is so scary and beautiful - astronauts went up, something happened, they never came back, public outraged, scientist cannot explain why it happened? Am I reading it right?

Here is something I couldn't puzzle out but interested me greatly - why the mention of the megalithic pigeon and the mastadon heart? I get that it is a juxtaposition between something incredibly old and this new space frontier, and all the new science, but what did you want to say by putting them in there? Sorry, again this is no fault in your writing. I am just the person that likes reading poetry because I like beautiful words together, but I am not very well studied in it and so I don't always know how to read it.

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Cole-y [2015-04-15 00:58:55 +0000 UTC]

my life goals: find another combination of words as good as 'megalithic pigeon'

this is superb. you're superb

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chromeantennae [2015-04-14 05:50:51 +0000 UTC]

so glad to see you here omg <3

and this is phenomenal c:

and AyeAye12 already told ye about the glitch squad so i don't have to now haha

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ghostinafog In reply to chromeantennae [2015-04-14 17:15:48 +0000 UTC]

aww you guys are too sweet <3 
i missed this place :3

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chromeantennae In reply to ghostinafog [2015-04-22 02:37:32 +0000 UTC]

<3
and we missed you c:

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gliitchlord [2015-04-14 05:08:42 +0000 UTC]

good to have you here, g

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ghostinafog In reply to gliitchlord [2015-04-14 17:15:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you, fellow g

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gliitchlord In reply to ghostinafog [2015-08-18 22:33:44 +0000 UTC]

congrats!

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Stenkuss [2015-04-13 18:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Pretty interesting concept. Halfway through reading I thought that it was more or less tackling the fear that comes with the unknown frontier of space. It is really cool.

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ghostinafog In reply to Stenkuss [2015-04-13 23:21:51 +0000 UTC]

space is the scariest/coolest thing in the world
thanks :3

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Stenkuss In reply to ghostinafog [2015-04-13 23:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Learned that from space odyssey. P.S. Gravity sucks

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scheherazades [2015-04-13 17:02:10 +0000 UTC]

brilliant~

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ghostinafog In reply to scheherazades [2015-04-13 23:21:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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saltwaterlungs [2015-04-13 14:04:50 +0000 UTC]

You're back!

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ghostinafog In reply to saltwaterlungs [2015-04-13 23:20:57 +0000 UTC]

always coming back for more

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AyeAye12 [2015-04-13 12:35:04 +0000 UTC]

OH HELLO I JUST POSTED A MESSAGE THAT I MISSED YOU xP

Great to see you back. How are you doing? The break has done you good; wonderful piece.

me and gliitchlord accidentally started a experimental collective for NaPo over at gliitchmonth you're more than welcome to join

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ghostinafog In reply to AyeAye12 [2015-04-13 23:20:10 +0000 UTC]

you have summoned me,  it appears

i'm still alive and i appreciate your feedback as always. glad to see you're thriving lit-wise 

that sounds really cool :3

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AyeAye12 In reply to ghostinafog [2015-04-14 08:42:29 +0000 UTC]

 

Likewise~

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BlackBowfin [2015-04-13 06:50:31 +0000 UTC]

Magnificent!

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ghostinafog In reply to BlackBowfin [2015-04-13 23:17:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you!
glad you're still here  

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BlackBowfin In reply to ghostinafog [2015-08-26 01:00:06 +0000 UTC]

BTW Congrats.  

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BlackBowfin In reply to ghostinafog [2015-04-14 02:06:14 +0000 UTC]

Heheh.  You're welcome.... and you too!  

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