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Published: 2012-08-06 08:23:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1078; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 26
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This is a full digital paint commission for TonyRaccoon over on FA!~
I think I'd appreciate some constructive critique on this if you've got it, I did a lot of new stuff and experimenting, especially with the fur... well, pretty much ONLY with the fur
Thanks for looking!~
Tony (c) TonyRaccoon
Kallee (c) Eriray076
Art (c) Eriray076
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Comments: 6
Wonderful artwork!
I like your fur technique. Basically because I'm using the same sometimes. ;3 What I dislike are the remaining outlines. I usually do it with all the outlines, or with none at all. I guess that's why this looks strange to me. Care to redo those parts so you get rid of all the outlines? I reeeeeally wanna see how it turns out. ;3
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Well, it was kind of a first for me, with the detailed fur and whatnot, so that's why I left a few outlines, because it didn't look clear enough without them 
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Great job on this! First off I'd like to say that I like how the realistic texture mixes in with the cartoon-ish expressions, really cool. You nailed the expressions perfectly and I can't find anything wrong with the perspective, thats just me though. Things I think you should try would probably be messing around with the colors of your lines. By that i mean try making the lines on your clothing a little lighter? The clothes seem seperated from your characters, they fit perfectly just the lines seem a little off. Other than that this is absolutely adorable <3 keep it up
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Thank you very much for the critique!~ 
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Wow awesomee
constructie critique well, or that cat is small or sofa is huge..I don't know but it feels a little desproportionated(?) Uuh pretty much everything Haha loved the perspective tho
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Yeah, I tried to make it look like the couch got smaller, like the raccoon was closer to the viewer, but it does look a little off
But thanks very much for the help, I'm glad you like it!~
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