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Published: 2011-05-06 06:17:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1600; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 10
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Late again . . . sorry
So . . . seems like Rysta and Mirko have the same idea . . . wonder who's going to end up succeeding?
I need to get better at action . . . I like the individual bits on the first panel, but not sure if I tied them together properly
I'm trying, really . . . 
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The brown hair guys is defiantly a person who loves to go after woman in a very bad way.
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i very much like the top panel series where she mounts aardrin 
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Out of curiosity, how close physically do Rysta and Aardrin have to be to communicate telepathically? He's right there at the door with his rump ready to hurdle...did she tell him to go there when she started running?
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Nah . . . he just knew that she needed a fast getaway . . . he's observant 
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I have greater faith in Rysta. She knows the area better, in my opinion...
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*chuckle* True . . . 
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As you can see from everyone's comments, you're being to critical of yourself. The scenes show the movement very well.
And you're in good company about feeling you're struggling with action scenes. I read an interview with Rumiko Takahashi one time in which she said she had the hardest time with that when she started Ranma 1/2.
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Yeah . . . but if I wasn't my own worst critic, how would I improve?
They ARE hard . . . especially making sure they look right and believable.
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Thank you 
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yw
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Aww . . . thank you. I've been having fun with it, I'm glad you're enjoying it
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yw 
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It takes a lot of time . . . I can vouch for that
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yeah...i already have my comic cover done but im thinking of redoing it lol
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The trick I've discovered is that I had to have a story I liked first . . . if I like the story the art is easier
I don't "like" my comic . . . at least I wish I could draw better . . . but I do like the story and the characters and want to do my best for them
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oh okay lol i think i may keep that in mind
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he he very interesting i ant wait to see the next pg
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Hopefully next week if I can get my act together
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Very good blocking and staging in this issue. Nice work. Very exciting stuff.
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Thanks! I've been working on it
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Damn girl it looks amazing!
Loving the action in this.
KICK THEIR BUTTS RISSY!
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I think it looks great! I like the first and last panels: the first panel looks like she's actually moving and not three different people (I have trouble doing stuff like that, so to me this is REALLY good!) and the last panel they look like they're moving with the horses' manes all ruffly and windy looking! Great job!
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Oh good! Then I did it right!
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You did good! They not only look like they're being moved but having to deal with the moving while "trying" to talk! Tis good!!!!
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That first panel is amazing. I may one day redraw that as part of a sketch dump cuz just WOW.
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*chuckle* Thanks . . . it was hard, but I've been practicing
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Definitely paid off. One of my favourites so far.
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Thank you!
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Woooooooo! Looking great! great action in this one!
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YAY! Glad you like
Oh . . . would you like a stamp? I'm making free ones again . . . check my journal on
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A stamp eh.... *goes to look*
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