makeyourownmusic [2010-12-24 11:29:23 +0000 UTC]
i love how yo've written this, in the form of a script and its nice that you write a little bit, its easy to read and not too much is given away until the next chapter
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GirMonster In reply to makeyourownmusic [2010-12-24 17:10:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Ya know I wasn't really sure about the script form. I wanted to do something different, and not go 'she said this' or 'he said that.'
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