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Published: 2010-10-06 23:40:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1889; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 88
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e ue finnally finished1st place prize for
its out oc couple tanu and neku and I hope she likes it
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I do love the outfits you design for them, they always come out so interesting. e ne and i want her shoes lol. Also interesting choice of textures~ and i love the pose~ it's so adorable.
Um... hmm, there's a couple of things I'd "critique" watch out on your fingers you have a tendency of thinning them out a lot at the tips. And, i can't really tell too well because of all the clothing, but also keep an eye out for your ribcage and hip/waist placements because it kind of looks like her ribcage is short and then her hips start right under where her ribcages would be? I have similar issues too with drawing sitting poses getting all of the hip/waist/butt etc etc with the folding, umm for poses like that I'd highly suggest on another layer trying to connect points (like guidelines) to check it. Same goes for Tanu's arm, his upper arm ends too soon, even if he were having it up and back. If you were to bring that part of the arm down and lean it in more towards neku it wouldn't make his lower arm too short if that was a concern, and he'd still be able to reach her face. I know you don't like using them P: but I think at least if you did it afterwords as a look over it'd help you a lot.
.... .____. again, long comment lol.
P: fear not tho, you're still getting better, just take time on double checking your anatomy.
Thank you btw!
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e ue;;;;; lol dani how do you think i'd learn how to fix my anatomy if you make it so darn long to read them
but i'll keep an eye out
and thank you
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>___> its called actually read it. You wont learn if you dont know why its wrong derpface that's what makes it long P:
Do so Do so~
of course n' thnk you~
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This looks fantastic! I love everything about this!
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Awwwww, cute kitty people *o* I want 2 rub their ears lols
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lololol e ue;;;; I dont think they'd let you
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Lol, if I give them a ball of yarn and catnip, they will lols
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ahahahahh e ue;; If only I knew how to start OTL
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Seriously, go to college and learn! You'd be amazing at it! ^_^
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Aahh they're so cute~
And I still want Neku's stockings. :I
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go make some e ue it should only take you a year or two e ue;
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