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JaiGamerx2 [2018-10-13 04:08:02 +0000 UTC]
10/10 please update
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izzythatpsycco [2015-11-20 14:53:58 +0000 UTC]
please pLEASE update you are so talented i cant handle it
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iloveyoshik [2015-09-13 23:43:42 +0000 UTC]
I love your dark Hetalia stories!! This is well written too. I can't wait for the next update!!
This reminds me of a YA novel I read last yea, but I've forgotten what it was called. It was about a village that sacrificed young women to this evil demon every year, and if he didn't like them he would kill them. But then he fell in love with the protagonist and they learned he was under a curse... something like that. I will tell you if I remember the name. :/
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EtiHeline [2015-09-10 04:34:06 +0000 UTC]
This is a better idea than what I'd meant. Thank you so much. The part with Toris being a satyr ( ) is very clever (you might need to communicate the concept a bit clearer though as--apart from the description box's explanation--he sounds like lesser demon instead) and I'm eager to see what you'll do with the other 2/3 of the Baltic Trio (a little suggestion, if you do decide to do the rest of the Baltics could you make one of them a domovoi?). Once again, thank you .
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JessiE-A [2015-09-09 22:48:15 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Another awesome story! But if I may offer a critique, this one doesn't seem as smoothly written as the others. I like the whole premise of the idea, but the beginning threw me for a loop and the pre-fruit-stealing scene fell flat for me. I'm not sure why, but maybe it was because I knew it was going to be a RussiaXReader fic. that I knew reader-chan would be caught. Hmm, it's strange.
But I love Toris! But I want to see more of my furry, four-footed, satyr!
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Tygermane [2015-09-09 19:48:53 +0000 UTC]
The start of another masterpeice! I love dark Russia!! Really looking forward to more!!
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ZennazFFz [2015-09-09 06:18:29 +0000 UTC]
I love that you made Toris a satyr!~ This whole "forbidden fruit" + La Belle et La Bête vibe you have going on is awesome!
Also, I'd keep the lover from before as Johnathan. Keep Francis' name open, ya know? It widens your options for the future, and whatever you may do~
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