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Glahardt — I'm a Sinner
Published: 2006-06-24 07:05:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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There's supposed to be the words "Greed is a sin" on the board behind him, but I'm kinda lazy and... Whatever. And the stuff tricling from his hand in the board? It's supposed to be gold dust(gold... dust...?), but I just can't draw it.Related content
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composition kinda bad. i totally did not know he was even having goldust in his hand. you should really get an anatomy study book. or get reference somewhere to draw the human body. again the piece looks very flat.
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Still practicing... I suck bad at anatomy, especially hands, dust... Maybe it's gone when I scanned it.
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i dont think the dust was even there. it doesnt even look like dust.
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Yeah... I suck. Still have to work on the stuff... Taking art next semester.
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just a question though.. if you think you suck.. why bother uploading your pieces then?
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I need critz, to help me fix it.
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dude, reality check.
dA's not the place for crits. you're living in self denial if you think dA'll give you good crits. the good artists here just dont look at lousy stuff like these. what more comment on them. its not worth their time. want crit? go look for a private tutor or sumthin.
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yeap. maybe one or two. who they themselves don't know much about the subject either. yeap. this is definitely the best place to crits.
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yeap. maybe one or two. who they themselves don't know much about the subject either. yeap. this is definitely the best place to crits.
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Uh-huh... This place is certainly not the best, but Hell, where else? Nevermind...
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no comments to that. make sure you know the stuff before commenting on things that you yourself know nothing about.
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Wow, that guy behind really scared me out ! He looks alive !
Hmm it seems you hyave got no real problem in drawing hands, that's good, really good ...
Okay so here is things I gonna say since you chose that advanced comment option ...
1.Focus of the picture. Well to be honest, this one still lack of focus. For this piece, it must be either the face in the back or the guy in front.
If you want to focus on the front guy, make the face of the guy at the back larger, or just draw his eye and mouth and ignore the hand.
Meanwhile, if you want to focus on the fac of the guy at the back, just place the guy in front lower and make him smaller. That's all
2. Mm maybe try to draw the body proportion more correctly, especially the head cos head is the most important part ... just practice a bit and you will get better. You've got the talent for it ^^
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