neotenist [2005-10-21 16:50:43 +0000 UTC]
Don't mistake maggots for catterpillars. YOu watched her change into a fly; he pulled off her wings. Change- deftones. We want them to be butterflies but once they mature, they've chosen their course and there's no turning back. Ya can change a cucumber into a pickle but ya can't change a pickle back into a cucumber and so forth.
The last verse is beautiful. I think it could stand alone.
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