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Description i.

"language,"
she breathed,
"is a piecework
mannequin
we move
to fit
our motif."


ii.

we take to the streets.
limbs aching; they seek;
the soft words unsaid
do struggle to speak.

we take in the streets;
the tired, the weak,
inspired with dire
desires to lead
lost choirs to sing –
not in tones,
but in pleas on the wing
do beseech –
and to feeding
the fire at our feet.

we thieve the concrete,
deceitful, discreet;
with the words
on our tongues,
we retreat and replete;
shadowed and black
and with lives
incomplete.


iii.

we're shaking
the strings
of your heart
and your knees;
your deepest
secrets
are ours,
there’s no need
for alarm,
for we
have the charm
and believe us –
the harm
is too easy.

and releasing
the chains isn’t
part of the game;
we’ll bend
you to shame
with our taunting;
and our hands curl to fists
and our gaunt fingers
twist;
and our smiles
remain ever-daunting.
and you’ll always
miss our blade’s
violet kiss;
and you’ll wish
for relief
from the
haunting.


iv.

"endlessly,"
he replied,
"they receive
our designs
and move on
to the words
that we speak."
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Comments: 9

YouInventedMe [2009-10-14 23:38:36 +0000 UTC]

excellent collab. it flowed so seamlessly that
I didn't suspect it even was one.

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gliitchlord In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-10-15 01:07:18 +0000 UTC]

We had hoped to break from the typical "call and answer" collab type. Glad it worked!

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faithful-muse [2009-10-09 05:41:15 +0000 UTC]

This is one of those times when I want to leave a meaningful comment but can't find the words to write one.

Beautiful.

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gliitchlord In reply to faithful-muse [2009-10-09 20:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Speechlessness is always a good sign.



Many many thanks!

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becbecmuffin [2009-09-17 23:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Samantha's bestfriendsistercousin. The two of you work amazingly well together.

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gliitchlord In reply to becbecmuffin [2009-09-17 23:45:12 +0000 UTC]

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losingmyfaith [2009-09-17 22:50:23 +0000 UTC]

you both did a great job, i really liked it!! (:

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gliitchlord In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-09-17 22:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Sankya!

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losingmyfaith In reply to gliitchlord [2009-09-17 23:06:44 +0000 UTC]

most welcome! (:

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