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cerrullian [2014-02-08 18:38:19 +0000 UTC]
Excellent start.
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glintbladesong In reply to raconteurr [2011-07-19 01:50:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for taking the time to read it and comment, that means a lot. I'll certainly play around with how I handle conversations cause they definately need a bit of work.
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Pale-Shadows [2011-07-06 09:03:51 +0000 UTC]
This looks really good. My only suggestion for your next fanfic would be to make a new paragraph everytime someone new has a dialogue part, makes it a little easier to read. <3 But as I said, this is awesome.
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glintbladesong In reply to Pale-Shadows [2011-07-06 11:55:03 +0000 UTC]
Cheers for commenting.
I did play around with the paragraphs but nothing really looked right. I remember my english teacher (oh so so many years ago!) telling me about a new paragraph for each new dialogue, but it ended looking far to spaced out. So I ended up with a mish mash of layouts where some dialogue is a new paragraph and some isn't. I'll definately work on that. Again, thanks.
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