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Published: 2016-12-05 14:50:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 29883; Favourites: 297; Downloads: 92
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I appreciate the comments so far about how I've built suspense in this introduction. It's something I feel is generally lacking in fan comics these days. Even though we're six pages in, we still haven't had a proper reveal of Team Fighters, but their presence is felt by how swiftly the Legionnaires are dealt with. While I'm sure everyone already knows what Team Fighters looks like, this is their first appearance in my comic, and I wanted to handle it with a little bit of flair.
On an aesthetic note, you'll notice that Lien-Da and Lara-Le are different shades of red. In many issues, most echidnas were the exact same red colour. This didn't help to distinguish them, so I opted to use slightly different hues to discern individuals. Second, while most Archie artists draw their braids on every quill, Tracey Yardley draws them on every other quill. I prefer this method because it appears less 'busy', and alternating the braids helps separate the quills. Third, Steven Butler chose to give Lien-Da black braids instead of her typical white ones in her final appearance, which is the look I decided to go with. Finally, I chose to omit the recent frilly hair at the back of Lara-Le's head because it just looks.... weird.
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hohoho, this scene remake was better played...
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The original scene was good with Lien-Da grabbing her face and talking trash, but this version when she gets spitted on just makes it better and adds a more dramatic feel to the story, like how you're crossing the lines Archie Comics probably wouldn't cross, wondering are you going to add minor blood and cursing like hell, damn, or bastard also???🤔🤷🏿♂️
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Now what was all that hot air you were spewing about an invincible army...?
and while I’m aware you have a dedication to the quality of story and emotional tension of said story- congrats I haven’t read the sonic comics but I’m already picking up so much basic context about the desperation of the echidna race(?)
enouch that we have an egg traitor
kudos on how despite all their losses, the mobians are fighting back and quite well that that too
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When Lien Da said " start with your mouth" to Lara Le.
Does that mean like kissing or something?
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Not really, but this is relevant now due to the Ugandan Knuckles meme.
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Uh... no. 
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Oh...right..sorry...me and my dirty mind
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Is this from Lost Hedghog Tales or are you making it from scratch?
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There's barely anything of Lost Hedgehog Tales for me to draw from. I'm developing the story on my own.
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Really amazing work so far Glitcher. Keep it up! It's definitely getting intense and I love how you keep the suspense for the appearance of the fighters even though we can clearly see that they have been helping out knock those baddies.
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These two are long overdue for a rematch. Wonder if any former Frost Legionnaires still have a soft spot for Remmy.
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Do I detect a hint of your own story in that comment...?
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Nope. In my version, I figure that the Legionnaires loyal to Remington were the ones that quit the Legion and got sent to Albion by Enerjak.
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Forget about Mammoth Mogul and sorry for the math mistake on Belle and Jacques but hey those were just suggestions.
Anyway I have a quick question when will Bunnie and Antoine return and will you use Lupe and the Wolfpack in your comic because they are my favorite freedom fighter group besides Sonic's group
Thanks and keep up the great work
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I don't want to give away future plans, but I can confirm that Bunnie, Antoine and the Wolf Pack will return later in the comic. That's it, no more questions.
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Also if you if it dosen't spoil anything how many issues are you planning on making?
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Hey Glitcher there are some stuff I forget to mention.
1 could you redeem Geoffrey by having him sacrifice himself to finally defeat Nagus
2 Maybe you could show what dr finitevus was planning to do with Scourge and Fiona
3 Could you include some of the 25 years later events like knuckles going chaos and destroying eggman and losing his right eye
4 Could you include what will happen to the iron queen and snively after she finds out that eggman tricked her with a snively clone
Thanks
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Darn it I forgot one last thing!
Could you have sonic finally defeat mammoth mogul ounce and for all?
thanks
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I thought Mammoth Mogul was already defeated. Do you want Sonic to kill him?
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I wouldn't blame Steve Butler. I remember when Lien-Da made her first appearance, many people mistook her for Lara-Le. Hell, even Dan Drazen called her "Dominatrix Lara-Le" for a short while until her title of Kommissar came up.
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For some reason I find the spittle absolutely hilarious. I doubt Lien-Da has any nerves left in her face after the Iron Queen blew it up, but I guess it's a matter of pride here. What's most confusing to me is exactly how freaked out she looks in the last panel. She's got however many oodles of baddies behind her and he comes waltzing up without bothering to hide his movements. Shouldn't she at least have a little bit of that cocky attitude (even if it doesn't last long)?
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Hi there Glitcher thanks for reigniting my passion for Sonic comics. I have a few things I want to tell you about.
1 Sally after being derobotizied she would be wearing her new outfit.
2 Could you show why Mina ends up marrying Tails instead of Ash.
3 If I did my math correctly wouldn't Bunnie and Antoine's kids, Belle and Jacques been born around this time?
Thanks for reading my comment and thank you for the comic and continue doing a great job.
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Thanks. It's heartening to know that my comic is bringing back a few Sonic readers. 
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Sorry to invade, but I think that MXYL (or "Light Mobius") shouldn't be the canon future, and that's just because of how it was written. I don't think there should be a "canon" future at all from the main characters' perspective, considering how this is the overly diverse and detailed Sonic series and making a canon future would lead to less audience sensitivity about the ongoing, and also lead to some elements being given more attention at the expense of others, as Penders' run on MXYL may have proved.
As for Sally...it was originally planned for her to be returned to normal by #250 wearing the outfit Bates designed. Just nothing was said on the "how" part.
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That plot development for Sally was Ian Flynn's original intention, but I would like to stress to all readers that I'm not following his outline. The reason is the same as the one you gave for MxYL: If you know the outcome, it ruins the suspense and disengages readers. This comic is my own story and my own vision of the future, which means that Sally's fate is still open to speculation. What will happen to her...?
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Thank you for reading my comment
But please have Sally be derobotizied
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Yeeeees please... if you want to stress myself YOU WIN. I cant think in Sally been a robot... Sonic and her friends must to save her... in some way...
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I like to be proactive that way too...
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Yeah! Go Lara-Le! Lien totally deserved that!
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I so do love that Lara-Le has a lot of fight in her- that's what I'd expect of Knuckles' mother.
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Nice to hear that readers welcome Lara-Le's feisty behaviour. I was worried I would get a few comments that it seemed too unladylike for the Matriarch, but I guess threatening her family would make anyone lose their cool.
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Oh yes it most certainly would, I should know XD
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um... lets see, married Locke (probably my favorite echidna), who was a major fighter, gave birth to knuckles, no need for explanation, and led the echidnas for what, around a year and a half? this much feistiness is needed.
second, i think that your portrayal of my second favorite echidna (Remington) is awesome, so thanks!
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I really loved what you did to give us all suspense! Makes it all the more exciting!
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Whoa-ho! I am loving what I am seeing and reading, I love how it builds the reader up and you get to see character's interacting with each other, specially how Lien-Da is towards Lara-Le spitting in her face, she is ruthless as ever 
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Her own nephew is going to take her down. Heh, poor Lien-Da... not!
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Ah! But do either of them know of the relationship? That's the big question...
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Oh! So, Lien-Da probably doesn't know that Kargok has a son. Ooh...
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Oh if you think that's bad, lady, wait'll you see what happened to the back up your most likely about to call.
I must admit, I do like Lien-Da as a character, but it's funny to see the universe show her up to be the sub-par smug Snake she is. She actually reminds me a bit of Cersei Lannister... only with more friends.
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Ha ha! That's a good comparison actually. If Lien-Da compares to Cersei, could Snively pass for the diminutive Tyrion?
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Quite possibly. He does seem to be a better planner than his uncle... or rather a more pragmatic planner. And the empire does run better when he's actively helping. And no doubt he'd have no problem shooting old Eggy on the toilet.
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