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Glumych β Blessed and Damned: Ricardo
Published: 2015-08-16 21:57:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1161; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 8
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A character from my webcomic. (hasn't appeared yet)Related content
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Really nice work with the pose over all, and the wrinkles on the clothing.
His accessories though don't seem to be as well thought out, and could benefit from a bit more attention and planning. (Looking up things like belts and broaches, even simple ones). Β You could give more dimention to the image by giving the belt just a slight bit of depth, and it also seems to be lacking any shadows.
I think even adding a few more shadows and highlights could make this pop even a little more all around. Β It wouldn't even have to be much, just something like a bit of a darker gray (or even subtle purple) inside of the sleeves, the collar and the scoop part of the hood, leaving the upper rim the same color. Β Then just a faint lighter green along the side of his nose closest to the light source, that runs along his nose ridges and his brow.
Maybe just a more subtle version of what I'm seeing you do in some of your other pieces, since this seems to be low light.
Though....I'm also starting to wonder now it this isn't meant to be more of a quick sketch mock up of the character.
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More like a quick sketch indeed. What you say is fair though, I need to work on my shading. Thanks for valid criticism.
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nice, only thing i'd change is the dagger that now is on a tangent with his belt :d move the point a smidge up or down and ban, better image (imo)
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Good point. I overlooked that.
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Good silhouette, I love the hinted-at detail of the blade, without overwhelming the viewer with tiny details.
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Good job! I think you should work on a more intense shading to make it better and realistic!
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Yeah, already kinda working on it.
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Maybe from Ice Age, but I know I seen that face before...
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