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Katerina-Art [2018-03-30 20:06:45 +0000 UTC]
wow your son is so talented!!!
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SachiiA [2018-03-25 21:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Ah these are so GOOD!Β
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Professor-R [2018-03-24 14:44:27 +0000 UTC]
He's really good, especially with the expressions!
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VivaLaGorilla [2018-03-24 02:31:28 +0000 UTC]
You have quite the talented family.
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Sleyf [2018-03-23 21:26:08 +0000 UTC]
I can see an animator or at least, cartoonist, in the making with a great grasp of exaggerated expressions (oh gosh, the flea, I remember that one!) www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGwA7zβ¦
Convincing your daughter to share her writing is one of those things I think she can only do herself.Β Sharing writing is not easy as one can feel embarrassed, or even afraid, and though it can be a difficult thing to do, it can also be very rewarding as writing is one of those things you can really improve on by sharing your work and receiving critiques or help.Β It's just that making the leap is difficult, and even after the first step, I know that a LOT of writers here on dA are still having to make more mini leaps when uploading stories or writing they might feel is not up to par or they're uncertain about, but in the end it really does help - you just have to be prepared to hear things you may not want to, but to understand that it's not a personal attack, only someone trying to help (first critiques are often very very difficult to accept and a lot of aspiring writers here on dA, even the older ones, sometimes make the mistake of letting that discourage them)
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Sleyf In reply to Gnewi [2018-03-30 09:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! Oh my gosh I used to love it when he put the dog's skin in a sandwich and bit it, just because of the noise his teeth made - also Ren and Stimpey (my mum never let us watch that!)
True, I mean art, you can only really be critiqued about the technical aspects, but with writing, the idea is also up for attack, or characters, oh gosh, characters, when people attack those without reason it can make you wonder if you need to change them (but usually it's just because people dislike their motives)
Yes exactly! I mean you (as in, the writer) are set in a specific way and can't see if it needs changing, or if it's working as intended, so you need someone to help you along by telling you if things work or if they're not. So if she ever does choose to upload, I suggest adding questions to readers she'd like answered - it also helps them help you iron out things you may not feel so confident about.
Yes lol, it was hard, considering I have a few really good writers following me, or whom I watch, and then there's a chance of them reading it and seeing how awful I am in comparison - I still feel that way! With specific work (actually recently with all my writing I've been caught up in the vicious cycle of 'I need to edit this to make it good, keep editing, must edit more!' and then it takes forever and the end result is nerve-wracking waiting for feedback on.
Aww thanks
Nathan is welcome
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Wyzzel [2018-03-23 21:08:57 +0000 UTC]
YEAH great! He WILL go his way!Β Β
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Forgotten-Kingdom [2018-03-23 18:53:00 +0000 UTC]
Omg nurture this skill so much.Β Let him know his dreams can be accomplished.Β He's a fantastic artist already and so young!Β I hope he does great things some day <3
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SlyFlySpyGuy [2018-03-23 17:43:31 +0000 UTC]
Very nice cartooning!
I'd be interested in reading your daughter's works. Writing is the only thing I'm really any good at.
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SlyFlySpyGuy In reply to Gnewi [2018-03-30 05:58:43 +0000 UTC]
Use a chainsaw. It always scares my kids into doing whatever I want. Unless they get to it first. Then it's a bit more difficult. But I still have most of my limbs.
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Gnewi In reply to SlyFlySpyGuy [2018-03-30 10:28:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh, goodness! How come I never thought of a chainsaw!
Most of your limbs? Which ones have they taken off? Hahaha! I know you have at least one arm/hand for typing. Or are you using toes now?
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SlyFlySpyGuy In reply to Gnewi [2018-03-30 13:31:28 +0000 UTC]
Ugh, I don't know! It was the FIRST thing I thought of.
I only lost the extra limbs. Like my 5th arm.
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Gnewi In reply to SlyFlySpyGuy [2018-04-12 10:34:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that's a relief! A few more and you'll look normal! Hahaha!
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JordoDeskjockey [2018-03-23 15:54:12 +0000 UTC]
These really are incredible!Β He did amazing work.
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Gnewi In reply to dragondoodle [2018-04-12 10:41:20 +0000 UTC]
Yay! That is awesome! Art and writing go so well together!
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SamwiseTheAwesome [2018-03-23 14:14:47 +0000 UTC]
These all look so great!
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