verstecktergeist [2004-07-07 05:16:56 +0000 UTC]
oh boy.. that's a really beautiful heartfelt poem.. today's the 2nd year exactly that my grandpa passed away.. it brought back memories.. i know how you feel..
this part especially is very very beautifully written:
I am not that far away,
I will always be near.
I will watch over you,
Each and every day.
it takes a lot of talent to bring a tear to my eyes.. but you've managed.. great work (^__^) (i didn't mean that sarcastically btw)
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creegansgal [2004-07-05 06:39:43 +0000 UTC]
Words can't really describe how the poem made me feel. It made me think of my mom who i have been missing lately and i just thought i would say that is great. I really liked it.
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