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godlyDescentUFO β critique pls
Published: 2014-08-06 19:09:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 791; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 3
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can i get a serious critique on my anatomyRelated content
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The eyes and head are beautifully drawn by the detail takes away from the rest of the body. Your proportions are pretty good but you do need to work on the hands and maby add a bit more detail into the clothes. If you have an apple or android device youy can download an app in the store called easy poser. It allows you to choose a basic body type from a selection and has poses and animations you can chose from. it also allows you to manually pose the model and adjust the lighting, as well as rotate around the model in any direction.. these settings take time to get used to but the app is free and helps very much.
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while i do really respect and appreciate this critique this drawing is like super old dude
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This is a really cute pose!!! I would suggest more attention to the hands and legs.
The Head is really detailed compared the rest of the body.
Over all the hair is really cute!Β
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Maybe add detail to the rest of the body since the head is very detail heavy, great job!
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i think adding more detail won't help. this will make the drawing very busy and there is no focal point. my suggestion would be to leave out al that unnecessary detail in the eyes, seriously how many high lights do you need 1 or 2 is plenty enough. by reducing the detail in the face you can put som more detail in the body (don't go overboard with detail like you did in the eyes), this gives you a contrast between busy detail and calmness. a lot of drawings have this, the artist makes for instance the background very busy and the subject you should be focusing on has less detail. this sudden contrast makes your eye go to the calm places making that the focal point.
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thank u 4 the input very helpful!
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your anatomy is great ;u;/ i'm jealous. even the hands look pretty good.
but if you feel for improvement. try looking at your own hands. or pictures on the internet for poses etc idk.
that helps for me though. I don't like to give critique since i'm not much of a good artist myself yet. I only like to give tips and ideas ;v;.
it's for yourself to decide if it's helpful in some way.
In my favourites you can find a shit ton of tutorials and studies which i keep adding new ones to whenever i find one.
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damn thank you smΒ
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you're welcome.
i love your art and characters. I actually am sketching them alot sometimes cry. I really will upload them when i finish them.
keep the lovely work coming! :3
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ahh!!!!!!dude thats so cool heck yea post them!!!!!!!!!
i will for sure!!!
thank you youre so nice you get a gold star
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A very good tip for looking at anatomy is try flipping the image so it's face the other way ouo
If it looks good both ways, you're doing pretty good with anatomy <3
If it's off and looks weird, you may want to keep practicing ouo
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oh my gosh i didnt know abt the flipping thing thank u!!!
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Of course ouo <3
It really helps :'D
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I'll do my best, google the human skeleton and start drawing that. Although I don't really see anything wrong per se, other than the fact that her ears turned into horns and her nose has been replaced by 2 holesΒ Β . Good job tough.
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