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MeliHitchcock [2008-02-26 19:05:13 +0000 UTC]

There's quite a few things I would critique on this to see improvements, but you don't have anything indicating if you want any or not. I will say, compositionally there isn't any sort of flow going on and my eye keeps jumping all around in a chaotic manner. Especially once I hit the archer (who looks a little too much like Legolas ) since he's facing the edge of the piece and pushing my gaze out of the illustration. The rendering is ace, so is the use of color in the whole scene. It's just some smaller issues that need tweaking.

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Leoncillo [2008-02-25 22:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Masterful! What a wonderful tone of colors, and poses

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