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gold-desire β The softest touch from spring
Published: 2010-04-11 10:19:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 3418; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 45
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A little touch of spring
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It was dark outside , so that's why the background is black ... but I like the contrast between the black and white
What do you think ?
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OMG that's awsome, I wish I could do something like that
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Great photography! And with the black background, it makes it more incredible!
Very nice composition!
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Thank you very much , I'm glad you like it
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J'aime beaucoup.... The contrast between the background and the flower is very interesting
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Merci beaucoup pour l'apprΓ©ciation
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Critique courtesy of #The-Photo-Critics
Critiqued by =Flame-of-the-Phoenix
- For this piece, I decided to "grade" it, but instead give you the parts I like about the piece as well as some suggestions that I think will improve it. Please let me know if you would like me to rate it as well, and if you have any questions feel free to write!
Critique
- First off, I really like the background that you used. The contrast between the black and white (as you mentioned) is very pretty and works well for the subject. Your focus is very good here as well, and everything that should be in focus is.
- I do have a few suggestions to make this even better. First things first, the framing: the way you have it here, with the subject centered, is alright but I feel as though it is a little boring. This shot has been taken countless times before and with a site as big as this, you need something to make you stand out. Maybe try playing around with the angles and composition; try using Rule of Thirds (if you don't know what that is, take a look here- [link] ). Another idea is to try bringing a squirt bottle or something similar and spraying the flowers down before you shoot. That way, you get the increased interest factor of the water droplets, which give a really nice effect.
Hope this helps a bit!
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Thank you for taking your time to critique my photo . Yes I know about the rule of the thirds , and this is my greatest mistake ... often I am to distracted and I forget about the right framing ... I give so much time to details regarding settings , but when it comes to give the photo a good framing I simply forget about it
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Sorry for MY late response... I definitely know how it feels to get caught up in real life. >.<
The grade I would give it as it stands now would probably be:
Vision:
Originality:
Technique:
Impact:
Yeah, as long as you can remember to compose, I think you definitely have it. 
Good luck with your future photos!! Glad I could help out a little.
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Thank you for your advice , and don't worry I get caught in real life too and I always respond late at the 
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No problem!
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You're right, the contrast is great. The focus looks awesome as well.
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Thank you , I'm glad that you like it
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You're welcome, and how could I not? I love dandelions.
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