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gold94chica In reply to Lord-Shinnok [2015-08-27 06:39:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the "birthday critique"! I'm glad you like it, even with inaccurate models. They are what they are..... but it's exciting to work with people who are currently making good models. I'll probably do another picture like this when I have them all.
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SinnamonSki In reply to gold94chica [2015-08-18 16:35:14 +0000 UTC]
i mean you put a lot of time in this picture your an SFM Inspiration!
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SinnamonSki In reply to gold94chica [2015-08-18 17:05:13 +0000 UTC]
see this is what you were meant to do God Blessed you with this art type
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PuzzlerDK [2015-08-13 14:40:33 +0000 UTC]
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General impression: Nicely done, solid, above average quality poster.
Posing: No visible downfalls, each pose reflects each animatronic's personality.
Lighting: For some reason not all eyes are glowing, aside that it's good. Comparing to your other works, this one's has a background light, which is highly appreciated. Colours selected suit the overall theme and create evil impression despite their brightness.
Atmosphere: poster absolutely fits the whole FNAF theme. Animatronics seem harmless, but you can't get rid of the feeling it's a trap. Title only increases the feeling.
Originality: Highly unoriginal and uncreative. Not that it's a bad thing. A lot of posters suffer from it. Considering the main feature of this work is creating an impression, not something new, the move is certainly justified.
Suggestion: Use a proper watermark instead of that title, it somewhat ruins the thing.
Personal development: The last critique I did was highly negative. This time around it's absolutely positive. I'm glad that you're constantly improving your skills. Keep it up.
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gold94chica In reply to PuzzlerDK [2015-08-13 21:27:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is very interesting timing. You know that I think about that Springtrap picture and critique a lot? I think it's the worst picture I've ever done, and I've been thinking a lot recently about redoing it, now that I have more than 1 week of experience. So, it's really interesting to hear from you again.
Thanks for appreciating the improvements I've made over time... I've had a lot of help too. I agree 100% with everything you said. Totally fair critique, and yes the posing was not meant to be original whatsoever, more just a model showcase.
And 3 of the eyes don't light up because they aren't supposed to, that's just how the game is.
As for the suggestion, could you mind expanding on that? What would a proper watermark be, if not my name in the bottom corner? I personally hate using watermarks, but the number of people who steal my pictures has been astounding. It still doesn't stop people from cropping or photoshopping the name out, but I'm not about to do what some people do and plaster a watermark all across the center.
Thanks again!!
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PuzzlerDK In reply to gold94chica [2015-08-13 23:33:02 +0000 UTC]
You think about it a lot, really? 15/102 think it's fair, lol. That's not couning horrible grammar, structure and spelling. By the way I just watched your entire gallery, and I think I can agree it's one of the worst things you've created. I've also read your drama stories, and I think I kinda know what's the problem is.
I've never understood why people appeal to FNAF so much. As you've noticed, I'm more of a TF, Warframe and so on kinda person. That's because each character in there has absolutely incredible personality and charisma. Animatronics, on the other hand, do not have nothing like this at all. But after thinking about it, I got it. The lack of informations stimulates creativity. People imagine features they'd like to see, and that makes them affected to the charactes. Even if people do not actually realise it. And by looking at other people's art they interact with other perceptions and thoughts, that's why community has grown so big.
Advanced Learner Oxford Dictionary definition of "art": the use of the imagination to express ideas or feelings, particularly in painting, drawing or sculpture.
And so here's finally the point that I'm leading towards. Your works lack creativity, imagination, originality. That's what holds you back. Think about what thoughts, ideas, emotions that you're gonna deliver to people. FNAF is just a way to do this, out of many. I think it's time for you to do deeper stuff. May be then you'll become a true Artist.
That aside, I'll try to make a proper watermark and contact you later. Because the point of "water" in "watermark" is that one are able to see through the mark, even though it covers a poster. Of course it won't stop advanced photoeditors, but...that's the way it is.
Hope I stated something not completely stupid, and take care.
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gold94chica In reply to PuzzlerDK [2015-08-14 00:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Well I think about it, especially recently. I think a lot about my journey this year, and that picture & critique was part of it for sure.
Yeah I know you're more into other things, as many people are. Thank goodness not everyone is into FNAF lol, else there wouldn't be anything made of other games. Yeah I love the TF2 characters for their personalities, and there are so many videos on youtube that just crack me up.
The only thing I can think about FNAF, is like you say... it fires the imagination. Scott created something with just enough story to get those creative juices flowing, and then we run with it. There is no wrong way to go about it really, but I prefer to stick a little more to the game and immediate fandom rather than getting too weird or original with it. But we'll see, since if the games are over, then I'm gonna keep doing my thing, whatever it is, and I'll be able to experiment even more.
I don't consider what I do as true art, however it does have a lot of artistic properties and value. Some more than others. FNAF does hold some serious emotion into the lore, but I'm really not into that stuff with killing and torment and whatnot, so I have to use the characters for my own emotions or other things. So, if you don't relate to those, then you won't get it. However, it's fun when I am able to make something truly canon.
I'm only interested in doing FNAF stuff, because that's all I really know about. I don't play video games or have experience with other genres, so I am inadequate to express emotion for them through SFM. Just FNAF. It seems to work for me and my followers, but I'm always trying to improve it. I doubt if I'll ever be a true artist, which is fine, because my satisfaction in life comes from other places. SFM is just a hobby, and it has turned into something quite bigger than I ever wanted.
I didn't mean for you to actually make a watermark, but if you want to make an example, then be my guest. I looked in your gallery for an example, but I didn't see anything. Lucky you to not have that problem, lol.
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BakaUsagi1123 [2015-08-13 01:08:54 +0000 UTC]
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*I have not seen your other works of art so please bare with me on this*
Well, I'm back to give you a PROPER CRITIQUE! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
-I'm confused on the mini Freddies that everyone has... did I miss something in FNaF?
-How come Golden Bonnie (is that the animatronics name? It's golden, but has Bonnie ears, so...) is the only one that doesn't have glowing eyes?
I love the intricate designs on each "box of bolts". The rows of teeth, tears, the rustiness, and fingers... fantabulous
-For the background, you shouldn't make it that light if you really want a more sinister feeling emitting from this art
-Since the eyes are glowing, you should make the surrounding areas darker
Well... even if I'm not even on time limit, this artwork is just... I can't find anything that is supposed to be a bit different XD
Impact: 4.5/5! THAT IS SO HIGH DUDE(ette?)!! Well, 4.5/5 is extremely high in my opinion. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> The only reason why you didn't receive .5 more, is because the back lighting made it too... I don't know, bright and it's not as sinister as it can be.
Technique: 3.5/5... Hm, like I said, I haven't seen your other pieces of art, but 3.5 is better than 3 or 2.5 e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Also, I think your style can actually be perfected! Maybe, just in a way... somehow
Originality: 3/5. This is the lowest, because it seems like an idea that is very normal for a fandom like FNaF; to have the chara's bunched up together. Though you did make this stand out more with the extreme detail, but it's still the same as the others in my opinion.
Vision: Visuality is outstanding! Of course, there aren't any better arts out there compared to this (from my memory), but this isn't absolutely #1. There are a few things that don't exactly pop out in my opinion.
I know I'll get tons of unfairness, but if you read my other critiques you'd understand that giving a rating such as 4.5/5 is as high as one's hope can get.
Unlsss I love it. Like if it had anything related to my likes. A 5/5 is certain in one category.
So I hope I don't get killed by this e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> You did well on it! 3 days... that's a long time! Normally, if it takes more than a day for a drawing, I'd discard it... lol :'> ;w;
GOOD JOB~!
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BitchyRedSniper In reply to gold94chica [2015-08-13 03:33:04 +0000 UTC]
Really, I try not to choose sides when it comes to stuff like this. In actuality, I find the FNAF-lore interesting, but I'm not 100% pro-FNAF, if that's the way to put it xD
Well, you're heading in the right direction with what you're doing, so keep it up ^^
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oltahasanaj27 [2015-08-12 06:29:12 +0000 UTC]
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this is amazing !! IT looks very original, and the plushtrap is too cute for me :3. i would say that its awesome, just awesome . so i can say that it would be even better , in my opinion i mean , for freddy , to hold his hat . all of the other characters have the right lighting and yeah , that it .amazing, amazing, amazing , amazing , amazing , amazing , awesome , amazing,
amazing, amazing, amazing , amazing , amazing , amazing , awesome , amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing , amazing , amazing , amazing , awesome , amazing,amazing, amazing, amazing , amazing , amazing , amazing , awesome , amazing,amazing, amazing, amazing , amazing , amazing , amazing , awesome , amazing,very nice i love it .
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gold94chica In reply to peck-the-eagle [2015-08-12 04:45:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, yeah I do make more stuff like this, already and in the future!
And the Freddles are made for popping out of random places! lol
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TheDarkLordK [2015-08-11 23:25:56 +0000 UTC]
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Uhh... I am loss of words right now, Great job on this excellent piece of artwork, Gold! And I like it how Plush-Trap has that one expression on his face where he's trying to be, like, cool and all, but the Nightmares are getting all the attention, and now he's pissed at the Nightmare animatronics, same as the little Nightmare Freddy's that Nightmare Bonnie, Nightmare Chica, and Nightmare Freddy are holding. Again, great job on this excellent piece of work, keep up the great work, Gold! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> I hope to see more excellent work like this in the future sometime! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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gold94chica In reply to Lonewolf583 [2015-08-10 05:08:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah they look silly... so it's a silly picture! Not scary at all! lol. At least I don't show Foxy's tail... or their legs at all here
Thanks!!!!
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