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Golden-Freddy-1337 — Here i stand Discord poem

Published: 2013-03-02 06:04:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1662; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 43
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Description Here I stand, in the fake world I live in.
Starring into the world I want to be in.
Watching the daily repetition
I want to end it, just out of intuition
Gah, another field trip, I detest those
But they began to fight, the chaos rose
It started growing, getting stronger
Then it came to me.
Setting me free!

Ah! The first fresh breath of air, it christens my lungs.
It’s been at least a thousand years since I felt its refreshing taste
I glance around to the empty garden; no one has noticed my return…
Well I guess I’m gonna have to change that, don’t I?

Boy it does feel good to see them run and scramble
Makes me laugh
They never saw it coming, there world in ruins
The way it should be~
But as I create my beautiful chaos, I see something
Well if it isn’t the great and amazing mane six
Seems like Celestia wants them, hope she doesn’t mind me eavesdropping…

AH ha ha ha ha! Oh now that was great!
Their faces when the elements went there~!
But…there was something about her~
Her yellow coat, soft flowing pink mane~
Huh? Gah, what am I thinking?
I must return to my chaos
Besides there waiting for me at that maze

Well there we go! My chaos has reached a great point!
Ah Twilights dear friends~
This world will for sure be mine!
I’ll let them do what they please; I have some worlds to destroy

Well it looks like they found there elements
I guess I’ll have to pop in, reassure them, in the only way I can~

This world is mine, I control all of it!
IT’S ALL MINE! AHAHAHA!
And yet…
I feel empty, I have everything I possible could want…or do I?

How could I not see it before? Well here it comes
The elements.

I underestimated again. Being done in by six mere ponies!
Oh they will regret the day they turned me to stone!
I will be free again! They will see.

It’s been about a year since I was put back in my stone prison
Stuck inside Celestia’s study, starring at a door.
Here I stand, again in a world I dread
Wishing to be free

Any regrets?
One, only one regret
I regret not telling her how I feel
I was in regret last time I was here, but for the reason I didn’t take the world
But this time
In regret that I didn’t tell her….
Tell her…what I feel.
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Comments: 10

GUILLE832 [2013-07-05 12:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Amazing job! I love how the poems tells his story as well as it shows us how Discord is feeling. I really think that you captured the essence of Discord´s mind. Because in the deepest part of his persona, I just see a lonely being waiting for company, wanting to be accepted.

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Golden-Freddy-1337 In reply to GUILLE832 [2013-07-05 18:16:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, i try to act as much as Discord as i could i mean i do sound like him and his my fav character, had to do him justice

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ILoveKimPossibleAlot [2013-03-02 15:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done!

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Golden-Freddy-1337 In reply to ILoveKimPossibleAlot [2013-03-03 01:41:38 +0000 UTC]

You really think so?

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ILoveKimPossibleAlot In reply to Golden-Freddy-1337 [2013-03-03 17:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Yea. I like the ending the best, but I might be biased.

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Golden-Freddy-1337 In reply to ILoveKimPossibleAlot [2013-03-03 19:49:21 +0000 UTC]

why thank you very much, and if you are its kk discord is amazing!

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ILoveKimPossibleAlot In reply to Golden-Freddy-1337 [2013-03-03 20:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Ok then

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Golden-Freddy-1337 In reply to ILoveKimPossibleAlot [2013-03-04 01:18:27 +0000 UTC]

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PearlDrummer1993 [2013-03-02 06:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Added to favs!

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PearlDrummer1993 [2013-03-02 06:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!!! As a poet I can tell you this is truly something!!! I love the passion and emotion none would expect from everypony's favorite (and my second favorite) master of chaos. I love how it brings ou into his mind and I can imagine the real Discord feeling these things. I commend you on this!!! Truly spectacular!!!!!!! <3

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