Comments: 16
BubbleTeaKitty [2014-10-29 17:59:22 +0000 UTC]
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I saw this and I was like, "Wow." It could use some colour, but that might take the impact away, unless you have special coloured pencils. It would also be a lot of work for you. The body proportions and such are amazing, and the look Tigerclaw is giving you... It's like challenging, elegant, and bold, unafraid, all mixed up like paint on a colour palette to make an absolutely beautiful gaze.
Bluestar has that bold look, like she's saying, "I'm boss, and there's nothing you can do about it." And Redtail, like he's wishing something had never happened. All of these are completely accurate. Keep up the amazing work!
~ Sparks
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GoldenDragonART In reply to BubbleTeaKitty [2014-10-29 18:03:56 +0000 UTC]
aahh! thank you so much for this awesome critique!!
yes, i dont have any form of coloured pencils, so i have decided to actually work on the colouring in digital as a little side project. c:
im so happy you think its good!!
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BubbleTeaKitty In reply to GoldenDragonART [2014-10-29 18:05:54 +0000 UTC]
Actually, that was only my second critique! But I'm glad you thought it was fair. I'm sure your fans will be happy about your project!
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GoldenDragonART In reply to BubbleTeaKitty [2014-10-29 18:10:04 +0000 UTC]
really? didnt seem like it owo
i hope they will xD i dont know if you could call them fans though xD im not that good of an artist to have "fans" it just feels more.. big, than "watchers" lol.
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BubbleTeaKitty In reply to GoldenDragonART [2014-10-29 18:25:07 +0000 UTC]
*sigh* That's what it's like with me..... I'm working on a really big piece right now, but I doubt any of them except one(she almost always comments on my art if she has time) will so much as look at it.
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GoldenDragonART In reply to Painted-Velvet-Roses [2014-06-23 01:38:43 +0000 UTC]
the" all white tom" is a light gray Bluestar.. aka, not white, not a tom xD
the one to the far left is Redtail (it says so in the description..)
thank you for the critique, well i never color my traditional stff, since i enjoy looking at black and white ^^'
thanks for critiquing, despite the little thing about bluestar and redtail! <3
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XThunderclanwarriorX [2014-09-13 04:03:55 +0000 UTC]
this looks so great! im working on bluestar wight now well ihave ben for like 3 months I kind of don't draw much
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ArchSerpent [2014-06-17 01:14:10 +0000 UTC]
You're so good at drawing cats realistically, Gold! ^^ Great job, this looks fantastic!
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