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goldenrainfalling — Betrayed-Reader x Gamzee
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Description You walked to the tiny hive with excitement.You clutched the small gift you had neatly wrapped to your chest. You couldn't wait to see him. You rushed into the building, bounding up the stairs you burst into the hive.

 "GamGam!" you yelled. But he wasn't in the living room. You went to the bedroom, the door was closed. A tiny warning popped up in your mind but you ignored it. You swung open the door and you were greeted with the sight of Gamzee and some woman you didn't know making-out. You gasped and let the gift you'd been holding onto drop.

 "Gamzee?" your voice wavered, he turned around, surprised.

 "(N-Name)?!" he exclaimed. His usual face paint was smeared.

 "Why?" you asked, your voice barely audible, "What did I do wrong?"

 "Nothing!" he said, tears started to fill his eyes as he realized what he just messed up.

 "Then why, might I ask, were you sucking faces with some slut?" you asked, the anger and hurt evident in your voice. Some of the tears you were holding in leaked out.

 "(Name) look-" he started off, but you cut him off.

 "No! I don't wanna look! I don't wanna see or listen to your excuses!" you yelled. He started to come closer to you.

 "No! Stay away! Fuck you!" you yelled before running out the apartment. Stumbling down the stairs you let the sobs you had been holding in came out. You started to run.

You were running down the street. You ran and ran until you found a motel. Wiping tears off your face as you walked in, you took a shaky breath. Looking around the lobby you spotted a few chairs surrounding a table and chose to sit there. You put your head in your hands and started to cry again.

~With Gamzee~
 "Shit! What did I just do!? I ruined a motherfucking miracle!" he yelled, sitting on the bed and put his head in his hands. He felt two pairs of hand on his back and the annoying voice of the girl he'd just been caught with say, "It'll be fine. You still have me." He looked up at her face.

 "Get out," he said.

 "Aw, baby. Don't be like that!" she pouted.

 "Get the fuck out!" he yelled. She flinched, but still stayed.

 "C'mon, I'll make you feel better~" she purred.

 "Get out before you regret it!" he screamed. She started to back out of the room but wasn't fast enough, for he had got up and pushed her against the wall. His hand at her throat, he squeezed until she started to choke.

 "When I said leave, I meant leave." he said as he snapped her neck.

~With Reader~
Your sobs echoed through the lobby.

 "Oh God, why?!" you yelled at God, though you knew that it wasn't his fault. You knew you should've paid more attention to the way he had been distant towards you. You felt a hand touch your shoulder. You looked up and saw one of the employees glancing at you and towards the back room nervously.

 "Look, lady, you need to either get a room or get outta of here." he said. You knew he wasn't trying to be mean. You nodded, slowly getting up and walked out the motel. You didn't even know why you there in the first place.You wiped off your smeared mascara and started to walk to your friend's house, knowing she'd cheer you up.

~With Gamzee~
Gamzee needed to find you fast, maybe he could still fix this. He picked up a tin of soper pie and began to slowly eat it, calming himself down. He could find you and fix this.

~With Reader~
You knocked on Feferi's door. You waited five minutes and gave up. You had forgotten that she said she'd be somewhere that night. You walked a couple blocks before you sat down on a curb. Part of you wanted to go back and forgive him, another wanted to hunt him down and rip his head off, but instead you cried. You hoped that he wouldn't find you. That he would just give up and you could somehow start over. Bringing your knees to your chest, you buried your head into your arms.

~With Gamzee~
He was calling your name and was wishing that this had never happened. Why was he so stupid? He saw a figured huddled on a curb and he heard sobbing. He ran over hoping it was you.

 "(Name)?" he quietly said. The figure stiffened.

~With Reader~
You stiffened when you heard him say your name. You slowly lifted your head to see him crouched in front of you, worry etched in his eyes.

 "What do you want?" you snapped.

 "(Name), I'm so sorry. Please, forgive me. Please, it wont happen again." he begged, and this shocked you, he never begged.

 "How can I trust you?" you said, "How do I know it'll never happen again?!" He cupped your face.

 "Because you a motherfucking miracle and I don't ever want to lose you ever again." he said, kissing you. His soft, painted lips were difficult to resist and you gave in. He broke away.

 "I'm so sorry, (Name)," he said, "Can you forgive this stupid motherfucker?"

 "Of course, as long as it never happens again."

-Extended ending-
You and Gamzee walked in your cozy hive. You were just about to go in the bedroom when Gamzee tackled you to the ground.

 "What the hell Gamzee?!"

 "I can't stay away from you."

Well, that was part of the reason, the other part was that the woman's dead body was still in the bedroom.
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Comments: 616

Krontriolle [2017-08-06 22:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow wtf killing someone for you getting caught? A bit OOC even for Sober Gamzee.

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Sakura9596 [2016-12-12 05:06:16 +0000 UTC]

The only question I'm thinking is, " What was the present I got him?"

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CandyKitty222 [2016-11-08 01:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Gamzee, the first rule of murder is always think of a place to stash the bodies.

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Sakura9596 In reply to CandyKitty222 [2016-12-12 05:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Like... Underground or something 

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Izaizme In reply to Sakura9596 [2017-04-22 04:05:19 +0000 UTC]

Or in a fridge somewhere

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SassyCat1313 [2016-09-17 05:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice save Gam

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CookieGirlXP [2016-07-21 19:36:03 +0000 UTC]

And that reader-chan's present lay on the floor forgotten and crumpled.....

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Gamzee-is-best-troll In reply to CookieGirlXP [2016-12-07 21:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Poor gift ;^;

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Kawaii-Diana [2016-07-14 10:01:15 +0000 UTC]

THe ending is hilariously adorable XD

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GamingTomboy [2016-02-14 15:58:40 +0000 UTC]

That Ending Doe

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GamingTomboy In reply to GamingTomboy [2016-07-02 05:08:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind seeing the dead body parts of of a lady. Actually what the fudge am I saying in real life I would've cried and then fainted

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goldenrainfalling In reply to GamingTomboy [2016-05-31 22:29:17 +0000 UTC]

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Panda-Chan-Man [2015-12-30 00:05:07 +0000 UTC]

Cute story

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fnafcoolness [2015-12-29 09:43:06 +0000 UTC]

This is oddly a cute one

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PGXPG5NAF [2015-09-06 01:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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MagicCreatorK [2015-07-17 14:28:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure why, but the line where I asked Gamzee what I did wrong practically ripped my soul out. 

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Bella789y [2015-07-09 13:28:23 +0000 UTC]

(Walks in on makeout session)
Me: Fuck no
Gamzee: Wait no Bella!
Me: (Grabs bat and walks into living room) See ya bitch!
Gamzee: Oh no, her last ex got it bad...
Me: (smashes TV, takes all faygo. Proceeds to walk outta house)
Gamzee: NO MA FAYGO!

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xXKarkatFeaverXx In reply to Bella789y [2015-12-07 00:10:12 +0000 UTC]

lol XD

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TwiilightBen In reply to Bella789y [2015-10-13 16:18:18 +0000 UTC]

*walks in on makeout session*
Me: no.... how could you...*gets a chainsaw* your dead!
Gamzee: Oh shit!
Me: *runs after gamzee*
       
Me:dont mess with me...  

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MagicCreatorK In reply to Bella789y [2015-07-17 14:27:51 +0000 UTC]

Lemme join you. 
*picks up another bat and smashes windows*

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Bella789y In reply to MagicCreatorK [2015-07-19 22:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I need all the help I can get

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MagicCreatorK In reply to Bella789y [2015-07-20 03:32:37 +0000 UTC]

No problem whatsoever. In fact, I'm quite enjoying myself.
*smashes a lamp*
*breaks husktop*

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dashiepotter122 In reply to MagicCreatorK [2015-09-15 04:48:03 +0000 UTC]

*Runs out with all the pie* HEHEHE!

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MagicCreatorK In reply to dashiepotter122 [2015-10-20 04:01:15 +0000 UTC]

OH CRABS LET ME IN ON THAT STUFF
*grabs pies and creams his hive*

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Spazzerazz In reply to dashiepotter122 [2015-09-26 21:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Let me get in on this too.
*Gets sledge hammer and matches*
...I like fire... >:3 

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MagicCreatorK In reply to Spazzerazz [2015-10-20 04:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, what would happen if we mixed sopor and fire and tossed it into his room?

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ChristineStrider [2015-06-27 02:40:42 +0000 UTC]

It's bad that I thought that the ending was funny and at the same time hilarous? B)
Me: *yawning* Gam gam Let's sleep, I'm tired
Gamzee: Motherfucking wait Lucy!!
Me: *walks out*...Is that A dead Body?
Gamzee: 'Shit!'

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ImAnAnonYaButt [2015-05-21 00:30:31 +0000 UTC]

tbh i would have just killed the bitch when i saw her. yeah. that's it. spare gamzee, kill slut. it works perfectly.

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Sprikel In reply to ImAnAnonYaButt [2015-05-26 10:22:07 +0000 UTC]

IWouldHaveJustAssumedSheDidntKnowAboutMeAndTryToStrangleGamzeeSureI'dProbalyDieButStill

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maria-newkirk-999 [2015-05-04 21:07:26 +0000 UTC]

that ending though.. XD

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AnimeLover2675 [2015-03-14 17:32:13 +0000 UTC]

 mean little dark 

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AnimeLover2675 [2015-03-14 17:31:50 +0000 UTC]

i love this story also the ending kinda a littl dak or it just me when tackled he to the ground and the woman dead body was there?!?

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Homestuck-Kid [2015-02-21 19:03:10 +0000 UTC]

That last part though, I love it!

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CrazyHetaliaLover13 [2014-12-18 02:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Love it! Especially that last line LOL

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Dooz-arts [2014-11-30 14:03:35 +0000 UTC]

that stupid girl >:'0
ggGGGHH this is just great dood, i love it!

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Happyluckygirl22 [2014-10-27 15:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Me:.....I smell dead troll....

gamzee: NOPE ITS JUST......FAYGO....YAH...FUCKING FAYGO

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goldenrainfalling In reply to Happyluckygirl22 [2014-11-21 17:06:56 +0000 UTC]

A new flavour of Faygo. Called 'Dead Troll'

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Happyluckygirl22 In reply to goldenrainfalling [2014-11-21 17:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Pffff 

gamzee: yeeaaahh....

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Itsinmybloodyouknow [2014-09-22 04:19:52 +0000 UTC]

GUDOUK GAMZEE!!!

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goldenrainfalling In reply to Itsinmybloodyouknow [2014-09-26 16:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha

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Itsinmybloodyouknow In reply to goldenrainfalling [2014-09-26 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Gamzee go home, you're sober.

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Musical-Nekomimi [2014-09-11 22:58:38 +0000 UTC]

"UhHh, My wIcKeD sIs? HoW wOuLd YoU gEt RiD oF a DeAd BoDy?"

Oh Gam....... why didn't you let me kill that slut bag?

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goldenrainfalling In reply to Musical-Nekomimi [2014-09-26 16:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha, because he wanted to do it

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souleaterchic123 [2014-06-18 22:39:35 +0000 UTC]

If it were me I would have broken his nose first and then, only then, would I forgive him

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goldenrainfalling In reply to souleaterchic123 [2014-06-23 06:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha

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souleaterchic123 In reply to goldenrainfalling [2014-06-24 04:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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moonowl3038 [2014-06-13 05:42:23 +0000 UTC]

im suddenly reminded of the youtube videos 'lamas with hats' btw gamzee ish so fricking cute damn!!

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goldenrainfalling In reply to moonowl3038 [2014-06-23 06:56:06 +0000 UTC]

IKR??? I love that!

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JamiiSylvia In reply to moonowl3038 [2014-06-16 17:55:19 +0000 UTC]

XD Your profile pic though

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moonowl3038 In reply to JamiiSylvia [2014-06-23 18:48:00 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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