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Published: 2012-05-14 11:07:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 3
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Description An elite soldier sent to bring back the deserter, Steiner, for trial and execution.
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Comments: 25

VisoredFan1293 [2012-05-29 19:23:05 +0000 UTC]

wicked cool, definitely another one i like!

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gorgonbreath In reply to VisoredFan1293 [2012-05-29 20:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I will be trying to improve these characters.

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VisoredFan1293 In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-06-01 02:17:48 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome! good luck on improving them

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pendraco [2012-05-15 21:17:23 +0000 UTC]

now, interestingly, she has full depth perception for targetting independently with both guns

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gorgonbreath In reply to pendraco [2012-05-15 21:57:53 +0000 UTC]

That's why she's an elite soldier!

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QueenCordite [2012-05-15 15:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Uh-oh, Steiner looks like he might be in trouble...

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gorgonbreath In reply to QueenCordite [2012-05-15 18:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Maybe... He may be able to undo her brainwashing by their military cult.

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QueenCordite In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-05-18 21:18:10 +0000 UTC]

So a potential unlikely ally, then?

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gorgonbreath In reply to QueenCordite [2012-05-18 21:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Yes!! But not a girlfriend,that's a bit too predictable.

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QueenCordite In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-05-19 15:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know what you mean. Sometimes writers seem all too keen to make love interests out of characters who probably wouldn't work as love interests and we're all like 'really?'

I like the idea of this character as a surprise unlikely ally.

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gorgonbreath In reply to QueenCordite [2012-05-19 16:16:12 +0000 UTC]

I think they would be very suspicious of each other and fight a lot,as friends they would kind of be like fellow soldiers and not romantic at all. They will probably meet other people.

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QueenCordite In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-05-19 16:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, doesn't sound like the pair of them are really 'couple' material.

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Hera-of-Stockholm [2012-05-14 17:13:52 +0000 UTC]

I can sense some real action/adventure here!

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gorgonbreath In reply to Hera-of-Stockholm [2012-05-14 17:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Yes,i've decided to go for a more mutant military theme.

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Hera-of-Stockholm In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-05-15 17:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Yes, military styles are always cool!

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gorgonbreath In reply to Hera-of-Stockholm [2012-05-15 18:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes, i think i shall make them brainwashed soldiers in a military cult.

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Hera-of-Stockholm In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-05-16 18:38:43 +0000 UTC]

they could have some zombies as well. Did you ever try zombies? Made out of stitched together parts. I'd think you'd do that with excellence!

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gorgonbreath In reply to Hera-of-Stockholm [2012-05-16 20:36:39 +0000 UTC]

I don't know about zombies,everyone does them,they're getting a bit tired. But there could be people with cybernetic parts added who have had their brains messed about with. Perhaps people who try to escape are made into mindless killing machine people.

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Hera-of-Stockholm In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-05-17 11:47:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's a brilliant idea Droids!!!

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gorgonbreath In reply to Hera-of-Stockholm [2012-05-17 11:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes, poor cyborg people that live a horrible sort of half life.

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Patrick2011 [2012-05-14 11:53:53 +0000 UTC]

awesome work my friend

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gorgonbreath In reply to Patrick2011 [2012-05-14 13:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!

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Thunderjix [2012-05-14 11:07:41 +0000 UTC]

nice XD would you like to enter my contest?

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gorgonbreath In reply to Thunderjix [2012-05-14 11:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for asking, but i'm really busy at the moment. Sorry.

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Thunderjix In reply to gorgonbreath [2012-05-14 11:11:06 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

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