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Published: 2016-08-19 09:04:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1950; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 116
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I hit the word limit and had to make it a download.I tried to make it smaller, but doing so cut so much that is butchered the story, so fuck that, it's a download so you get the whole thing.
I hope you like it.
So let me know what you think, be as honest as you feel you need to be, it's cool.
Thanks for reading. ^_^
A reader mentioned how they couldn’t remember certain details after reading so much…So I’ll put them here to be a refresher…this is of course my cannon view on things and may or may not be how Toby Fox envisioned them.
Lynsie is 5'8’’, a brunette with mid-back length hair that is in a ponytail tied with the faded red ribbon, pale white skin, she has hazel eyes that tend to look green most the time, and her outfits after becoming Toriel’s daughter all have the Delta Rune emblem on the chest.
Sans is 5'4''
Pap is 6'4''
Gaster before the CORE is about 5'10'', while after the CORE he's 7'0''
Grillby is about 6'0''
Napstablook is close around 5'0''
Mettaton is also around 5'0'', Mettaton EX is taller at 6'6'', and Mettaton NEO is a massive 7'2''
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I've thought about doing things like that but it never quite cut right.
I was never happy with where or what was acceptable for the pause.
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Weird....
im not seeing the page........ -and I wanna read it too! D: ;-;
edit: read the lower comments, oh, lol
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Lmao, not suggestive at all Gaster XD
that waltz thou..
da~am... kinda wishing I was in her shoes for this xD
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He has his moments. One moment he's a jerk and the next a nice guy.
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Yeah... life is kinda like that lol
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The x-mas chapter shows him off more in his liking her.
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Yeah, you can see it pretty clearly there. Heh.
and Grampa Semi-my lord. You want her to marry/date all three skele-bros? XDD
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Semi just wants the family to grow, he don't care how or by who, just as long as they're happy.
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Heh, still it’s cute though how you managed to pull the love square-in a way-very well written ^^
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I like how he came out as a character considering Toby scrapped him during game creation.
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Yeah I heard about that; Tony had a whole plot planned out for just Gaster and Frisk. It’s a shame he didn’t go through with it. Maybe we’d be left with more answers on how he got like that and if the skele-bros are his brothers or his sons lol
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Considering he worked on Undertale and Deltarune at the same time, it wouldn't surprise me if he left them out of Undertale so they wouldn't spoil things in Deltarune. Gaster is heavily implied to be in Deltarune. Who's to say Semi won't make his debut?
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Interesting. Once I get my computer fixed, I must play Undertale then Deltarune. To be fair, I thought Deltarune was a fan made thing until I saw that you could actually download it for free... unlike Undertale lol
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Oh no, Toby Fox made it himself. He released chapter one for free. Deltarune is going to be put out in a set of chapters.
If you have a Nintendo Switch, you can get it on that for free.
But when it comes to Deltarune, Toby himself has said while it shares characters of Undertale, it is not a continuation of Undertale, Deltarune is (funny enough) an AU.
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O wow! Now I really wanna get one of those new DS’s-even if it’s just to play chapter to chapter of the AU made by Toby o,o
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It's a bit funny. We make all these AUs for his game and then out of the blue he shows us that he had his own.
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Hehe, true, it seems the aus made him catch a cold lol
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Error Sans must be so annoyed by that. His job just got harder.
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Oml lol
so True xD
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Haha..... *sweat drops* don’t killlll meeeee Error...
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Oh my gosh, I love you. That They Might Be Giants reference... Just yes. That was my favorite song for a long time.
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You are the first to recognize the song. You get a achievement trophy.
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Heh heh. I blame it on many things, including that not-actually-a-smart-phone that for some odd reason had some They Might Be Giants songs on it when I got it. I listened to them soo much.
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I remember them and that song being on Nickelodeon's KaBlam!
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omg Mettaton... NO! get a hint already! *was kinda lost in some of the science, but understood a considerable amount - surprisingly enough*
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He learns...eventually.
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figures it'd take a while.
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Yeah...Toriel gives him a talk.
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After he has a very weird dream...You are welcomed world.
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Ok this was an awesome chapter, but that last line from Meta.... WTFH!?!?!? I did not see that one coming! However the bonding with Gaster was infinitesimally cute!
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It's actually a line in the game code that isn't used but I wanted to be funny.
Oh yeah, Gaster moments are awesome.
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That was confusing as balls but once I read it I loved it!
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What part was confusing?
All the science stuff I bet.
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All of the stuff with Gaster also that big maths question does it have an answer lol?
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The math was the formula given to create a force field, I got it off this info page.
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Force_fi…)
As for the things G and I were talking about, this should help a little bit.
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quantum_…
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Many-wor…
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Never heard of research for a fanfiction!
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well, even though it's a fictional game that I'm making a fictional story about, I like to, for lack of better words...keep it real.
I like to remain as close to the original material as I can and still ground it in our logic so that it feels possible.
Then again, according to the many world's theory, who's to say my story isn't real in another universe?
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Can I go to that universe and eat cake and cookies with Napstablook?
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Are you coming with?
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Can you put Napsti into the story?
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I thought he was?
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