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Goth-Lolita — Cuts
Published: 2004-05-23 16:44:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description The blood won't stop
It won't reseal

It's over this time
It's time I'm done in

It's only pain
It won't go away

It's over now
It'll be over soon

Why won't it stop?

I only wanted to feel
It's not what I wanted

I really didn't mean this
It's not going to stop

It's all of this
I don't want it to happen

I need this to end
I can't be done here

I need to stop
These cuts won't reseal
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Comments: 9

Goth-Lolita [2004-06-01 00:08:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks
*goes to look*

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The-Demon [2004-05-31 19:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Great poem !!!
Touching ........ and true . would fit to one of my pics .

D.

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Goth-Lolita In reply to The-Demon [2004-06-01 00:21:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks
*goes to look*

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lost-tortured-soul [2004-05-23 16:56:37 +0000 UTC]

The danger of cutting... Excellent piece, perhaps it will open people's minds to how dangerous it can be... great job.

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Goth-Lolita In reply to lost-tortured-soul [2004-05-23 16:59:35 +0000 UTC]

yes it is.. hopefully it will
and thank you

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lost-tortured-soul In reply to Goth-Lolita [2004-05-23 17:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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Goth-Lolita In reply to lost-tortured-soul [2004-05-23 17:03:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm checking out your poems right now
very nice stuff

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lost-tortured-soul In reply to Goth-Lolita [2004-05-23 17:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thank you.

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Goth-Lolita In reply to lost-tortured-soul [2004-05-23 17:13:34 +0000 UTC]

lol
no problem

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