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Gothicamew — Cooking Com Profile Take 2
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Published: 2011-08-08 04:00:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 619; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 23
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Newest version: [link]Commission info: [link]
THIS IS A COMMISSION!
Please like their page: [link]
Ah...so much better, huh?
NOTE: Added the flowers.
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Comments: 13
This is very well put together. But, is she supposed to be standing? It looks as if she's sitting, on her hair.. I'm a little confused about that. I think it's very cute how you have the eggs and the cooking hat with a smile. I only gave you 4 stars on vision becaude of the hair and the shoes look a little boxey. But other than that i thought it was great! I gave you 3 1/2 stars on originality because everyone seemes to be drawing people these days. Technique I gave you 5. Very nice job! Impact was only 4 1/2 because the position seems a little odd. But great work! If you thought I was hurtful, PLEASE LET ME KNOW! i know what it's like to have a bad critique. Don't feel down about what I said. It's wonderful! I couldn't do half as good!
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This is a terrible critique.
It doesn't analyse any of the "bad" features and what she could improve on.
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Yes it does. XD Have you seen the improved version?
[link]
I like the blocky shoes, though.
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Hurtful? XD You're silly. I ask for critiques for a reason.
Yeah, I just started working on hair. Not totally sure how to show she's sitting on it. Guess I coulda folded it over or something. I focused more on the overall hair part. Whoops. Haha!
Yeah, she's sitting. Putting shadows on the food made it look really awkward, though.
And you can totally give me a 0 for originality - it's a commission. XD I did exactly what my commissioner told me. XDXD It's not original at all.
Anyways, no, I'm not down about what you said. You simply helped reiterate feelings I had about it, and things to work on.
You're adorable. 
Thank you very much for the critique!
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no problem! glad to help!
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Oh now, THIS IS JUST RICH.
"No critiques plz, but I can still write them".
Get your act together, girl.
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Why thank you! I forgot the flowers on her apron, though. I'll be adding those soon.
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o3o It looks awesome either way~ <3
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