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gothick-girl β€” Chosen you
Published: 2007-05-29 01:02:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I am driving in my car,
The man on the radio is singing what I feel,
And it makes me think about you,
It is so late tonight,
And at this moment,
I can’t decide what I want more,
To taste your lips or the bottle,
It is a shame really,
How easily it is to crawl into this liquor-filled reality I call life,
It is as if I am writing my own destruction,
A modern day Oedipus they call me,
But you call me so many beautiful things,
All that I drown out with liquid ecstasy,
You deserve better,
My car trembles as it gains speed,
My eyes are burning but I can still the curve,
But I go straight,
And I hear a crack,
And I am laying,
Numb,
As I lay here knowing I am not going to get back up,
I begin to think,
I would have chosen you.
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Comments: 5

satirique [2008-10-01 20:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I like it, but it's so sad, it makes you think about the situation when you finish reading it, anyway...

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gothick-girl In reply to satirique [2008-10-24 13:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the comment. Sorry it took so long to thank you haven't been on for a while. I tried a new style of writing and this is what turned out, I like it though.

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satirique In reply to gothick-girl [2008-10-24 19:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry.
I like it too, as I said

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playing-the-observer [2007-05-31 19:02:41 +0000 UTC]

that was amazing hun!
i love the ambience (sp), it feels straight out of the sandman.
its very hollow, but very meaningful. like the person doesnt care what theyre talking about, but they continue talking, they get off subject, but only to point out things about themself.
i love you!

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theZAT [2007-05-29 03:37:57 +0000 UTC]

this is verysad but very good (writing) -hugs-

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