disneyforever808 [2013-05-29 01:58:57 +0000 UTC]
Hmm....could the voice be Eilonwy? although I not think so, since he doesn't even know her yet. And I love how you decided to include more on the Fair Folk. I think it would look better if you had taken your time with the descriptions, and not rushed it a bit. But still, wonderful!
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Gr0banit3 In reply to disneyforever808 [2013-05-29 02:26:27 +0000 UTC]
I will keep that in mind about the descriptions in the coming chapters, so thanks for mentioning that, it really helps!
disneyforever808 In reply to Gr0banit3 [2013-05-30 21:34:03 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome!
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Gr0banit3 [2013-05-28 16:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
sevenofeleven [2013-05-28 10:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Its a good read.