sevenofeleven [2013-06-18 18:31:26 +0000 UTC]
I found a bunch of issues, will send them in a note later.
If you can, try to do some more revising.
I write too and its cool to publish stuff for a waiting audience.
You want to get it out to them as soon as possible.
Take a bit more time to revise.
Other than these minor issues, its a good read.
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Gr0banit3 In reply to sevenofeleven [2013-06-21 05:40:45 +0000 UTC]
awesome, thanks for the note btw. I will take a look more in depth at it before I write chapter 8
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