ann-athema [2003-07-30 21:33:36 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, i love how descriptive it is without using too many words.
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starryangelicus [2003-07-30 21:21:19 +0000 UTC]
very nice. makes the reader really visualize this whole piece.. wonderful job.
rangarig-dragon [2003-07-30 21:16:18 +0000 UTC]
*claps* Now that's a good poem graeme! The others were a lil bit - lemme say - strange. That's really good!!!
maddievedder [2003-07-30 21:08:32 +0000 UTC]
what a wonderful description!!