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gyoGUTS [2014-12-22 05:32:47 +0000 UTC]

wow -30/10 not enough hand, not enough dead kid I can't believe this

This isn't going to be very long, I'm not fond of trying to pick around and you have a pretty solid grasp of anatomy, probably more solid than mine. I'm not good at hot man meat, you've got that pretty down pat. 

So alright, I'm going to just dive in, let's go!

- His head to neck to shoulder ratio is fantastic but his waist/hips are disproportionate in ratio to his shoulders - I didn't even realize it at first but if you remove his legs from the picture, you might see how small his waist is in comparison. His shoulders are almost double in length to his waist. While men are V shaped and if you're going for a more dramatic/exaggerated look, that's fine, but is that what you're going for? If so, the legs have to be adjusted in accordance. I'm sorry, I can't say anything about legs unfortunately, that is not a matter I am well versed in.

- his one hand (wow that's a good hand, maybe eight more of these would be great A+) while, like I said NICE HAND (y), is too big. The one way I remember this is in frickin high school people used to play that game where if your hand was bigger than your face, you had cancer and then they'd smack your hand into your face because you were dumb. That's it. Your hand with outstretched fingers usually will never over encompass your face. 

- And if you want to make it look more like Kodiak, try to add more of the small details. I know it's not finished and I know you love your POST COMPLETION EDITS so it's not really an issue but THINGS TO NOTE: he has a lip scar, his hair has a bit of a blue tinge - YOUR HAIR IS NICE BUT it's on more of a yellow spectrum, his hair is pretty asymmetrical (kodiak, please, your hair), and that should be a turtleneck crop top (this is the truth, I swear it) 

- this background is too grey, please consider adding more neon green, plzkthx

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