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Published: 2014-08-23 00:47:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 717; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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My OC Victoria.I'm starting to develop a consistent shading style, it seems.
I don't think anyone noticed, but I'm way less active here than in the previous months. This is because of school and other commitments that have started, and now; since I have pretty bad time management skills; I can only find time to draw on weekends/during lunch break/on holidays, pretty much. I drew the sketch for this in math class though
Character, drawing (C) GrayOblivion
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hiya~ im here to give some feedback on this~~
firstly this is very cute and the shading isnt too bad on it
i will be picky on this, because it'll be things to keep your eyes open for.
the anatomy seems decent, id just watch the head a bit, it looks a little large.
the shading is also not bad, but you may want to define a light source since its a bit here there and everywhere. also watch out on how much you use the fringe tool, i personally wouldnt heavily rely on it if you can, i did it once before and it can get limited
other than that, id say maybe add some highlights to the hair, and work on the smoothness/flow of the picture, as some parts seem a little forced.
but anyways, if you need extra help, do ask, if not, keep going because you'll improve for sure~
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Thank you so much for the critique! I'll definitely keep a lookout for these things in my future drawings 
May I ask what the fringe tool is? Is it similar to the stroke tool on Photoshop? I've been trying to tone down on using it in my more recent drawings (after I overused it in this piece) since it made it look like there were random shadows where there shouldn't be.
Again, thank you so much! Your critique means a lot to me~!
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awesome~~
oh ok, sorry, in sai theres ther fringe tool, and it probebly is similar to the stroke tool as what it does is adds a lineart around the brush stroke you make
aww your welcome~~~ i look forward to seeing you improve~
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I see, so it's pretty much the same as the stroke tool.
Thank you
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sounds like it~~
your welcome~
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