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pikaCOOL360 [2013-11-02 01:27:28 +0000 UTC]
What sort of training DID Carmen go through for her gut to withstand that pressure?
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bellyfan123 [2011-08-21 22:42:04 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome!!!
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bellyfan123 [2011-08-13 03:59:41 +0000 UTC]
oh god im so turned on
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HurtMe-Plenty [2011-06-02 09:32:53 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why you think this is a poor start, I felt you captured the to e of the series well, striking the right balance between humour, plot progression/exposition and belly related shenanigans. Its always difficult to take the reins of someone elses story, but I think its a challenge you've risen to admirably.
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greatbigslogen [2011-06-01 12:46:13 +0000 UTC]
Next I'll probably begin writing the next part of the initial storyline with HMP, unless an idea for another prologue piece idea comes to mind.
However first I need to write something for Fudgepops who has been waiting far too long.
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deviantfetishlver In reply to greatbigslogen [2011-08-13 20:40:47 +0000 UTC]
speaking of which, where the FUCK DID HE GO?! he just packed up and left the site.
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