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Fabulolz [2016-04-11 02:56:52 +0000 UTC]
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Alright, alright, alright, gonna critique this even though I'm not quite sure what the pairing is- I'm here to critique the artwork mostly. XD
Okay, I noticed that you used a different texture for this piece. Like, the lines look like a crayon or pencil texture? Am I just crazy talking here? It also looks like there's sparkles in their hairs, which is cool. ouo
Anyway, your linework is seriously improving and I'm very proud of you for that. It's not perfect (no one's really is), but it certainly looks a lot better than some of the other drawings you've done in the past. I'm glad you took my advice on that because I wanted your artwork to get better!
One thing that I feel like is a bit offish is the left guy's hand. It's in a fist which is something I don't really understand. Or is he grabbing the other guy's neck skin? Make it more obvious that he's cupping his face and open his hand up rather than keep it closed because it might look better. Also, maybe add another arm to make it look like he's cupping his entire face or make the other guy also cup his lover's cheek? That's just for added fluff mostly (From the cheese master)
Overall, I'm impressed because you're getting better with every piece you produce. Keep up the good work bro!
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Greeceskitty In reply to Fabulolz [2016-04-11 23:15:57 +0000 UTC]
It's ennotana and I am in rarepair hell send help-//
I used the crayon tool i made for the drawing b/c if u put a back ground colour it shows through slightly and i like how it looks really sketchy :3Β
ahhh thank you! I spent a while redoing the sketches until i got them cleaner which kinda helped me w/ the lines b/c usually i have really messy sketches so the lines just go wherever but for this I had like 5 sketch layers-//
thanks for the advice on the hand bb. I was having trouble and the reference was a dude like doing a really weird looking cupping of the face and I didn't know how to draw it. This was as close as I could get and I couldn't figure out why it looks so wrong but now that you point it out, it does look like he's grabbing his face in a fist. Rip-//
thank you bb .////.
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Fabulolz In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-11 23:22:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm not completely familiar with HQ!!. It's only because of Mars and you talking about it that I know a little bit-- XD I've been meaning to watch it though-- Or read it. I ship kagehina though- X)Β
AH HA! I'M NOT CRAZY! Yeah, it turned out really cool looking! :3 Everyone gets a little messy with sketches, but I'm glad you've figured out something that works for you!Β
Now I'm glad I pointed it out- XD I'm glad I could help!Β
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Greeceskitty In reply to Fabulolz [2016-04-11 23:30:29 +0000 UTC]
WATCH IIIITTTTT-// kagehina is gr9+10-///
My sketches are too the next level messy though like-//
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Fabulolz In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-11 23:32:13 +0000 UTC]
It's like when I shipped reigisa before I watched Free! XD
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cicadaemon [2016-04-11 02:11:05 +0000 UTC]
Its my other OTP omg its so rare to find this stuff!
I love the lineart and the little sparkles so much omg
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-11 18:08:56 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I KNOW honestly they would be so cute together!! I have doodles of them everywhere lol maybe I should post some and give them more representation!
Its not bad shush It looks super nice okay its so good!!
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Greeceskitty In reply to cicadaemon [2016-04-11 23:01:56 +0000 UTC]
Every time ppl forget about enno its like??? all of karasuno is paired with their next number like??? 6 comes after 5 man the tanaenno is canon-//
Ahh if you post the doodles that would be great omggg your artstyle seems so cute asdfghkl
no it is bad i didnt put enough effort into drawing my sons-//
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-12 01:14:59 +0000 UTC]
True, like he ios such a good character. i mean look at the episode that was about him and running away. He is such a good character and him and Tanaka together would balance out so well and uggggggghhhh
I'll clean a few up and post them lol
Shuuuuuush its so good
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-13 18:36:47 +0000 UTC]
I never really thought of that omg, Ennoshita totally is a combo of Daichi and Suga. Ennotana is the new mama and papa crow except Ennoshita is complete parent and Tanaka is the cool uncle that lets you take a sip of beer when mom isnt looking.
(Ennotana is so canon no one can convince me otherwise lol)
AHH THANKS YOU SHUSHIES YOURE MAKING ME BLUSH
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Greeceskitty In reply to cicadaemon [2016-04-14 01:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Tanaka is the cool uncle omg-//
and the second years are their smol crow beans im dead-//
(au where everytime tanaka goes to study with ennoshita its actually them cuddling and being cute dorks because they are canon and I will fight for them-//)
No problem! Your art is really cute like omg and the way u draw asahi is amaze *^*
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-14 02:54:15 +0000 UTC]
Hell yeah he is
I cant stop imagining the others getting in to hijinks and Enno trying to stop them and scolding Tanaka for encouraging them lol
(I want to write this now omg omg omg)
THANK YOU OMG Asahi is my favourite so hearing that is such a honour omg
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Greeceskitty In reply to cicadaemon [2016-04-15 00:15:55 +0000 UTC]
"Stop fooling around! We need to practice!"
"Chika stop being a mom, we're just having fun!1!"
(go ahead dude. I'd love to read it : O)
no problem! your asahi is perfect honestly ahhhΒ
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-15 00:52:54 +0000 UTC]
"What did you just say?"
"Nothing mom."
"TANAKA I SWEAR TO GOD...."
(once Im dont the next chapter in my current project i will do it lol)
Duuuuuuude
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-15 03:11:34 +0000 UTC]
I JUST MADE A VERY INHUMANE NOISE AT THAT LOL
(broo omg its okay I havent written fanfiction in ages so loool)
Then fight me
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Greeceskitty In reply to cicadaemon [2016-04-16 22:13:37 +0000 UTC]
Sadly 'daddy' doesnt fit in as well as it does with 'daddychi-//'
(imma still read all of it though *^*)
shit ur not supposed to actually fight me-// IM GONNA FIGHT YOU ANDΒ lose because im weak ripΒ WIN
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-17 01:07:55 +0000 UTC]
WELL NOW IM DRAWING ENNOTANA DADDY ART CAUSE WHY THE FUCK NOT (and Michimiya calling Daichi Daddychi cause thats a new one and i love it lool)
(tell me what you think lool probably has a lot of typos)
Im super weak and all talk dont fight me omg
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Greeceskitty In reply to cicadaemon [2016-04-17 02:03:57 +0000 UTC]
*^* yes more ennotanas-// (Michimiya would totally do that omg : O )
(Im reading it rn and you get the personalities so well ahhhh your writing is so good too *^*)
No now I have to take the challenge-//
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-17 02:06:44 +0000 UTC]
Ill do it tomorrow since I have the day off lol (Michimiya is so adorable and her and Daichi are the only heteros in the show okay)
(broooooo thank you omg omg!!)
Ugh my grandma just called and i have to go home immediately lets schedule this for another day
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Greeceskitty In reply to cicadaemon [2016-04-17 02:21:44 +0000 UTC]
noice *^* ( Michimiya is adorable I wish they showed more of her TTATT ur story might be getting me to start shipping them btw im already at the 'kinda ship them' stage and now I feel like I have forsaken my love for daisuga rip-//
(no problem man your writing is amazing and there are like no mistakes omg why are u so good at everything teach me ur ways *^*)
I'll fight u when it switches to 12 then-//
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-17 16:03:27 +0000 UTC]
(She is honestly so pure and good lool Ill tell you when I have written it)
(Why are you always making me blush omg .///.)
HECK YEAH BRO
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-18 00:40:20 +0000 UTC]
Yui is just the most amazing minor character okay she needs to become a more major character I need to see more of her
SHUUUUUUUSHSGGD
(Im getting sick so this should be fun omg I will lose)
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Greeceskitty In reply to cicadaemon [2016-04-20 02:07:39 +0000 UTC]
Ova based off of Yui plz-//
NOΒ
(im already sick-//)
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cicadaemon In reply to Greeceskitty [2016-04-20 03:05:20 +0000 UTC]
YES PLEASE
yeees
(well just cough on each other then lool)
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