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grendel022688 — Nightmarish poem 1
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Published: 2009-10-07 22:13:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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You tore me openI loved a lie
You tore me from the inside
I couldn't die
Hello sinner
Ms deranged anger of darkness
Angel of devastated hearts and bodies
Only satan can pull off sane so well
While the truth of actions leave you
In your own private hell
Denies, denies, denies
And the curtain falls on who I despise
You tore me open
I loved a lie
You tore me from the inside
I couldn't die
Hello angel
You smile at me
The darkness knowing just who i am
And the angel still wondering
Probing with a gantle hand
Victim in waiting
Too broken for a voice
Angel wanted to heal
Angel wanted to hear me squeal
Not much of a choice
You tore me open
I loved a lie
You tore me from the inside
I couldn't die
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Comments: 5
Amazing. Would you mind me using some of this for a song I'm working on? I've been trying to make a chorus,and "Angel of devastated hearts and bodies
Only Satan can pull off sane so well
While the truth of actions leave you
In your own private hell." would be perfect for it.
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It depends on how well it meshes with the rest of the song, but if it does, then yes.
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Another question. May i make a song out of it if i put your name on it? Like when my band makes our first Album,you're name will be on the list of people who wrote the songs.
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Excellent poem!! Great use of description, very powerful
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