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Published: 2010-09-30 08:30:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description This is a photo of one of the boats that're at Fisherman's Warf in in San Fransisco. I don't think this is a particularly amazing shot, but I was drawn to the composition. Slightly photoshopped. I desaturated it and added a sepia overtone. I feel like there's something it's missing, but I can't figure out what it is. Anyone have any photoshopping suggestions for this shot?
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Comments: 11

Check-o0tmePancak3s [2010-09-30 21:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, Β‘me gusta! I love the moss accumulating on the chains especially. Yummy moss.

But to answer your question, I have no idea what should be added to it. Maybe. . . no, aucune idΓ©e. Sorry.

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GreyLynx In reply to Check-o0tmePancak3s [2010-09-30 23:01:25 +0000 UTC]

No worries. I really liked the moss too. I think it provided a good mood for the photo that wouldn't have been there otherwise.

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Check-o0tmePancak3s In reply to GreyLynx [2010-10-01 00:09:21 +0000 UTC]

I agree. It's just that subtle nuance. Hey! Maybe that's what it needs! Just a little subtle nuance. A spot of rust here and there, for instance?

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GreyLynx In reply to Check-o0tmePancak3s [2010-10-01 00:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Hm... interesting though. I was kind of going to an old-age sort of look. I'll see what I can do about that. Not a bad idea.

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Check-o0tmePancak3s In reply to GreyLynx [2010-10-01 01:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh yay! I helped!

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3wyl [2010-09-30 18:53:00 +0000 UTC]

I can understand your reasoning about something missing... I can't quite pinpoint it myself, but... eh.

I feel as if the framing is a bit too tight with the right side. I like the low saturation, though, and how that seems to reflect the overall atmosphere and mood...

As for what's missing, perhaps it's just a simple case of positioning? I suppose... if you cropped this into a square (I don't think it's possible, as it would be too tight), it would feel more compact and balanced out, but at the moment, it seems to be floating a bit?

Not bad, either way.

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GreyLynx In reply to 3wyl [2010-09-30 23:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you. Maybe I'll grab another of my photos and see if I can't crop it down. This one is actually completely uncropped.

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3wyl In reply to GreyLynx [2010-10-01 18:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, interesting. o.O

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Amaya-Zorifuki [2010-09-30 08:35:18 +0000 UTC]

It looks really cool and interesting. Can't imagine what might be added though.

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GreyLynx In reply to Amaya-Zorifuki [2010-09-30 08:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you.

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Amaya-Zorifuki In reply to GreyLynx [2010-09-30 19:14:26 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome love-bisquit.

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