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wapy [2009-05-02 09:38:30 +0000 UTC]
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Though at first I didn't really know what to say about this piece, a closer look at it shown that there's a lot to in here. The description help a lot to the understanding of this fight God, which also can explain the ferocious background, which color was well chosen. Though, and still about the background, I can say that the color could have more variation - it's not bad, but the continuous brown on it doesn't let it grow to be even better. The lightening in the places near the God looks pretty well, I coulnd't have asked for more.
About the character, I have to say I've seen you painting better before. Nevertheless, the colors go along well, the only thing I have to say is about the shading - I know for sure you can do it better e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" /> The lights on its left hand are really nice too! :3 I am just a little sad that there's no backlight from them on the God, but it's ok as well e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" /> It doesn't lose much because of that e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
In the overall... e.deviantart.com/emoticons/n/n… " width="35" height="31" alt="" title="#1" />
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Grishend In reply to wapy [2009-05-02 18:12:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique.
But yeah, this is what will happen if I delay works.
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Grishend In reply to wapy [2009-05-05 15:21:55 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha yeah I did rush on my works sometimes too.
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caleb247 [2011-10-02 09:05:28 +0000 UTC]
hmm...
1:lightning to outline the sky.
2:glow to signify magma way deep in that trench there.
3:rocks are too round, some of them should be jagged, not just the spires of stone, the rock shrapnel too.
4:maybe add runes on left arm, the on wielding magic.
5:arcs or lightning/magic to connect the joints, actualy, lightning dosen't feel right, how about just magic?
6:moar imagination, go nuts! DO NOT HOLD BACK!!!
7:I realy hope this helps!^^
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stardust-oracle [2009-05-20 03:07:09 +0000 UTC]
Aaah I haven't commented on this >__<
Summons~!! ^^
I love reading about them too, and all sorts of mythology <3
the BG is nice~! =3
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The-Mirrorball-Man [2009-05-02 15:49:01 +0000 UTC]
Very impressive chara design. The colors look nice too.
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Jathman [2009-05-02 05:01:33 +0000 UTC]
this is an interesting design, good job on the color level on it.
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GucalovPavel [2009-05-02 04:12:02 +0000 UTC]
strange creature... but drawing is really cool!!!
great work!
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ForbiddenImmortality [2009-05-02 01:32:08 +0000 UTC]
waiii!!!
awesome design!!!
....cant write the critique..need subs lol
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