spacecadetnet [2017-04-11 13:30:42 +0000 UTC]
I like the ambiance here and the red color pop.
I get that this is like a lighting and color impression, but...Right dead center above the red window - the cross hatching of brush strokes on the cement feature just totally messes with the believability of volume and dimension. Only bring it up b/c I like most else that is going on here. It's worth going back and fixing b/c this would be a nice little study or environment concept.
Everything else here feels very real and like it belongs in space, but that one area is weak. The smooth fill like you did with the other faces of the building and then any brush strokes with the form lengthwise would unify it with the building and improve the over all piece.
Very cool stormy atmosphere + +
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spacecadetnet In reply to Grobelski [2017-04-11 15:19:04 +0000 UTC]
LMAO oh man, sorry XD I didn't even look at the date!
What's that meme them youngsters are doing now, where they redraw old pieces and repost them on one board to cross compare? Eh, I dunno what it's called. You should do it!
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