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THIS IS THE END OF THESE.
I am revising the entire comic! I will be following a similar story line with similar characters. Characters will be further developed and molded properly. Background would will be improved as well as colours and design of the page.
To be able to get myself into the flow of doing the comic again I needed to revise some pages. especially the ones with the characters in them. I could not spend all my time all on every page so I chose this page to start the revise on. Unfortunately I found this style not as refined as I would have liked it.
I am going back and revising the entire thing when I am ready with a completed story script this time. Writing page to page does not work very well. :<
THERE ARE MORE PAGES TO COME!
Do not fear, this comic project will not die! I will not let it D8<
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wow! is nice to see you back! i love this comic, and the new style on it look like it gonna work, the only thing i dont like is the size of the text. its kinda hard to reado but beside that it look great...
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Great to see this coming back. Incredibly impressed with how much your art style has evolved. It's almost as if a completely different person is making this comic. I really loved the art style of the older version, but this one has that grittyness I'm always attracted to. I'm eager to see where the storyline goes now, as you mentioned there might be some changes since you're getting back into it. I'll be impatiently waiting.
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would you like a revision of my character?
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I would love that! Send me a note
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Wow I remember reading this way back. Nice to see it going again.
I always liked the realistic Pokemon designs in this one. Seems you've gone from 'comic book' style to 'graphic novel' style, not too sure how'd I describe it, since those two can be considered kind of similar.
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I have no idea, painted style thing for thing. Maybe. Hhaha.
The new pages look so different to this.
I will be posting the entire volume at once so people dont wait and wait and wait and wait.
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I'm glad you're starting this again! Excited that you'll be using our character designs from the contest. (:
I really like the new style change though it seems a little loose, but I think that's what you're going for. It looks great!
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Yes indeed! This first few pages I can actually fit anyone into the story. Unless someone wants to be a 7 year old grass trainer/Filthy no good gambler? xD Yeah, those are the options.
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Oh my god, I am SO EXCITED that this is happening again! These pages are GREAT! I cannot wait to see how things unfold! SO AWESOME.
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Yay! And I missed Blaze <3 hope you are doing well!
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I am indeed doing well. I hope the same for you! DA's just not quite as awesome without you around, you know? ^_~
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Awww you are such a sweetheart <3
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I was so very happy to see this comic in my in-box. I have been waiting for it to come back for ages!
The new revised pages look a lot more interesting, style-wise, and I'm eager to see where this story goes!
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So glad you like them. My goal is to make the characters a lot more interesting then they originally were. Also working on my colour palette.
Thank you!
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Loving the new/revamped pages! Can't wait to see more!
So, out of curiosity, are you still going through with using the characters from the contest you held ages ago? Your journal made it sound like you were. If so, I'm totally stoked since I was one of the winners! lol. If not, that's cool too, though
Keep up the fantastic work! That Weavile is crazy intense, btw O-O I feel like it's going to devour my soul or something o_O haha XD
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Yesyes I will. The winners will still get larger roles in my comic. I will be chatting to you in the future <3 I do have plans made, but first I need to fix my script up. Its been thrown all over the place since I was working page for page on this. So...Time to fix it
And Weavile is a dark type. She is meant to give that impression x3 Also her name is Monster HAHaa. Totally works.
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Cool! Good to hear! I actually have a more thorough summary of her background that I had to write up since I entered her into a competition a while back, which you can find over here: [link]
Fleshed it out a bit, and it also has info on her pokemon (you can ignore the other four pokemon on there if you want since I know you originally said just 1-2 pokemon per trainer.)
Really looking forward to seeing what you come up with!
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HOORAY THIS COMIC IS BACK!!! i'm so excited. i love the way you draw pokemon realistically. can't wait to see more!
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