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GUDRUN355 — An earth wish
Published: 2012-05-20 11:22:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 488; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 6
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Description Today I fade in
grassy green
in azure blue
and red clay brown.
Someday, I'll bring
the buildings down
and end in
earth's enduring
scene.
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Comments: 36

Hattie5v5 [2012-05-22 09:53:57 +0000 UTC]

So pretty it makes you wonder how beautiful the earth would look without us ruining it

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Hattie5v5 [2012-05-22 10:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Exactly what I was trying to say! Thank you so much for reading!! And also for the fave!

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Hattie5v5 In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-22 10:09:41 +0000 UTC]

You are so very welcome, i love your work, it's so inspiring.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Hattie5v5 [2012-05-22 10:13:47 +0000 UTC]

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hackslash197 [2012-05-22 01:00:31 +0000 UTC]

I wish I had the power to bring buildings down... Such a good metaphor!

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GUDRUN355 In reply to hackslash197 [2012-05-22 01:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ! And thanks for reading!

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dreamingshadow18 [2012-05-20 20:28:24 +0000 UTC]

There's a subtle darkness in those words. I really like it.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to dreamingshadow18 [2012-05-20 20:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you very much! I wrote it this morning looking at the creepy backyard! Thank you for the fave, Mr. Singer-Poet guy. Your poetry is getting very very good BTW. It was good before but I can see that the words are becoming more fluid and gaining such power. I meant to tell you yesterday.

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dreamingshadow18 In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 21:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you very much. I get lucky from time to time though. Sometimes I have the right words and sometimes I don't. I was actually very impressed reading this piece of yours. It made me think of a rhyme recited by a Bard in some fantasy universe. Or the translation of ancient text on the ancient grave of some long dead Noble.......You'll have to forgive me. I drank my coffee a little fast today lol.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to dreamingshadow18 [2012-05-20 21:21:40 +0000 UTC]

Thats OK. Thanks for your kind words.I really appreciate you reading my poem and taking the time to comment. I really do.

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dreamingshadow18 In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 21:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Anytime. You're a powerhouse. I don't say that to everyone lol.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to dreamingshadow18 [2012-05-20 21:24:49 +0000 UTC]

(thanks)

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Ginger-Cat-16 [2012-05-20 18:59:56 +0000 UTC]

I like the poem. do continue on it and elaborate. I like the emotion. And I live in the country: totally worth not being near anything.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Ginger-Cat-16 [2012-05-20 19:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! So much! I hope your concert went all right today. I'm such a music lover!

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iamluli [2012-05-20 16:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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GUDRUN355 In reply to iamluli [2012-05-20 16:26:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!And also for the fave!!!

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iamluli In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 16:30:03 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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GUDRUN355 In reply to iamluli [2012-05-20 16:31:27 +0000 UTC]

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andrekosslick [2012-05-20 12:52:28 +0000 UTC]

It is a detail small out of my work of the small world. That illuminates in your words. And a melody of a diligent ant. Sounds like the song of a giant to the world over the sky.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to andrekosslick [2012-05-20 13:07:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the honor of this comparison! I mean it. It makes me very happy! Thank you for reading and for this nice comment.

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redgarnet64 [2012-05-20 12:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Great!!!

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GUDRUN355 In reply to redgarnet64 [2012-05-20 12:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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redgarnet64 In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 13:55:41 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!

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GUDRUN355 In reply to redgarnet64 [2012-05-20 14:17:23 +0000 UTC]

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NewMuffin [2012-05-20 11:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeees, bring the buildings down I'll help you.....
do continue with this poem, makes the wheels in my head turn...

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GUDRUN355 In reply to NewMuffin [2012-05-20 11:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Good. I need the help! lol My apartment building has a backyard of yucky sand and cement. No nature here and only weeds grow. Sometimes I want to escape to the countryside.

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NewMuffin In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 13:45:06 +0000 UTC]

I live in the countryside & we have a huge Garden......come visit

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GUDRUN355 In reply to NewMuffin [2012-05-20 13:46:50 +0000 UTC]

I'd absolutely love to!

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NewMuffin In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 14:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Do you miss Germany?

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GUDRUN355 In reply to NewMuffin [2012-05-20 14:17:05 +0000 UTC]

I really do. I think I get homesick for it.

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NewMuffin In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 15:10:24 +0000 UTC]

.......then come home........

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GUDRUN355 In reply to NewMuffin [2012-05-20 15:12:06 +0000 UTC]

If I ever go to Germany again, there I will stay!

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NewMuffin In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 15:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Where do you live now?

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GUDRUN355 In reply to NewMuffin [2012-05-20 15:24:36 +0000 UTC]

New England.

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NewMuffin In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-05-20 15:27:10 +0000 UTC]

ohhhh.....well just drop by if you ever happen to be passing through......seriously, I mean it!

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GUDRUN355 In reply to NewMuffin [2012-05-20 15:39:02 +0000 UTC]

You're so very nice. thank-you.

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