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gunzgal0r3 — The Mask's Desire Ch.1 Pg.25
Published: 2014-04-22 04:04:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 5013; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 13
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It's so close! It's been a very nice build up so far to the big event
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Glad to see that you like it.
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This is getting good. I think you should go with the whole body transformation. It looks like it would be cool and also be cool to see a 2 or 3 step whole body transformation
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I hope there is a bit of foreplay, just diving into the transformation, while awesome, would be overly quick...no? This is like waiting for a fine wine to be aged, and we should savor it...right?
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Have you read the rest of the comic?
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Then there is all the foreplay.
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Heh. Considered it more akin to backstory, but right. Love it man, hope to see the transformation soon.
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Well in some way, I have been purposely torturing everyone with the beginning of the chapter because I know that everyone is anxious to see the first transformation. And the reactions have been hilariously-wonderful. But the beginning was mainly there to help get the story going.
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Will not be long now for the transformation of Sylvia occur. I wonder what will be the transformation of the mask with her. Tomora that is slightly different from the classic form of the transformation that always ends with a tornado and that after covering the head completely Sylvia and distort your face (or whole body was as if the nightmare she had), already a little more unique than before.
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No it is not going to be like the classic or the dream. It was going to be the classic version but I just realized that it really does not fit well with the story. But your comment did generate an idea for how I am going to do the scene. So thanks.
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Looking forward to the big event that is coming up, however I am unsure if 'Meanwhile' is the right word for the panel transition from the shop as it is suggests that it is happening roughly at the same time as the previous page. Wouldn't 'Later...' be a better word transition or am I getting confused?
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Thanks for the input. I did not realize I made that text box like that. Plus it did not help that it was almost 12:30 am where I live. But thanks for pointing that out for me. I was really tired when I got that page finished.
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Aren't we all tired when we finish stuff xD ?
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For me it was the fact that it was almost 12:30 am by the time I got it done. I don't usually stay up that late during the week cause I work at my job during the week.
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That makes sense, so I wonder how many more pages before she decides to try it out xD
At least the build up in the story is good, so it makes the effort worth it I guess :3
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