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Guy-Fawkes — That One Place
Published: 2010-12-24 06:48:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 242; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description I have found only one place with true joy
one group where I can be free
all people filled with love,
all led by an emcee.

There all of us are united
by the warbling bass
feeling the same revelation
moving as one quivering brace.

I can only really live on the dance floor,
only thrive in the beat ecosystem.
If every day life holds me back,
dubstep releases me from that prison.

If society constrains me,
EDM unfurls my wings.
If work just makes me duller,
the RAVE lets my soul sing.
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Comments: 5

NocturnePixie [2010-12-26 05:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I love music and this is just awesome. I don't know what else to say or how to say it lol

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Guy-Fawkes In reply to NocturnePixie [2010-12-26 06:00:19 +0000 UTC]

You've said plenty, thank you! I'm glad you can connect :]]

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yomna101 [2010-12-25 21:38:04 +0000 UTC]

This is well written and it's enjoyable! However, your first stanza kind of contradicts itself and kind of jives with this silly - yet serious - comic: [link]

It reminds me *a lot* of an essay I read on something like "the philosophy of raving" or "can raving change the world?" I always wonder what makes a rave different than some other random party, like why we get to be all cosmic and wonderful and whatnot (maybe it's just the eclectic tastes in drugs? *sigh*) or maybe, maaaaaayyyyybbbeee, there is something deeper going on? [That was a run-on sentence.]

"beat ecosystem" and "If society constrains me, EDM unfurls my wings" are really nice.

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Guy-Fawkes In reply to yomna101 [2010-12-25 21:55:02 +0000 UTC]

I see what you're saying, that was mostly desperation for a rhyme right there xD I love that comic, it's fucking brilliant. Tiesto doesn't even count as a rave DJ, he's said he hates raves. Fuck clubs.

I know exactly what you mean, I think its the fact of what people intend when they go to a rave vs any other party. Like, if you go out clubbing, 99% of people intend to get laid. To the point where that is the entire reason they are there. Kills the vibe, you know? At a rave people obviously will still get laid, but people go there to enjoy themselves with cool people and music first and foremost, sex is just a happy side-effect. That's my theory, at least.

Thank you for the in depth comment :]

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yomna101 In reply to Guy-Fawkes [2010-12-26 00:54:28 +0000 UTC]

No problem, and I completely agree with your second paragraph. Your theory is my theory too.



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