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Published: 2006-08-04 00:31:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 905; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 95
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Contest entry for *color-me-club .Lineart by =Victorie .
I spent a lot of time on it.. well, not as much as I'd want to since this has a deadline to be met (this saturday). Do I like it though? There are a few mistakes I can already see in it, but in such a short period of time, (I think I only had about 2 weeks to complete it ASIDE from my two major assignments in school and being really ill the past 5 days) I think I did a pretty good job.
So tell me what you think of it now that it's finished. I had a few screen shots of it during its initial stages; is it what you hoped it would be? And please, stop looking at her boobs. I kept it simple there for a reason.
Edit: btw, I coloured the birdy like Toucan Sam!
and I didn't forget her eyebrows, I left it on purpose. It's slightly too thick for comfort when filled in with a solid colour. I like it just the way it is
For more information on the piece AND HOW TO VOTE FOR ME (XD), check out my journal entry: [link]
Edit: Voting has ended. Thanks for making me third place! <3
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Comments: 36
Wowwie
I love your style.
It's all coloured so well, *nods*.
Great eyes ^^.
xxx.
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I'm sorry I was too late to vote. I love the picture though. 
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I'm really really sorry I didn't get over here sooner x.x but yes, you've made her look fantasmic! I do wonder if she's following Toucan Sam's nose...or if he's following other things.
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You're so sweet!! Thanks so much for taking the time to look and even comment on my colouring! It was an awesome lineart (and I just couldn't resist colouring it!) and I had a lot of fun working on it. Thanks!
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O.o WOW! You is such a good color....ist?... anyways, I relly like what you've done, there may be some mistakes, or not, but if there are, they don't STICK OUT. XD
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omfg, the hair and the flowers are amazing. 
I like the texture on her clothing too. The leaves look nice, you did a great job with the time you had!
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rofl... i really do love her hair... thank you ^__^
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Now I want mango juice. I hope you're happy. *faves*
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LOL i like mango juice too
thanks for the fave!
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Actually, mango nectar is best. :3 It's like juice only minus the added water.
And of course, no problemo.
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haha that's too sweet for me! >_<
actually, i like to mix peach, mango and oj together, it tastes so good
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lol, I never did like peaches. X3 OJ rocks, though.
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Wow! I love the coloring on the girl, and the shading in the sky!
the ONLY thing that seems off to me is the fruit in front of the pineapple.... the gradient is just kinda off.
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yeah its not lit like the rest of them.. i know lol >_<
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Ok over here on a more SERIOUS note. It looks awesome. The flower in her hair was the first thing I saw when I full viewed the picture. It was just too cool lol. I still say though that a darker shading could have been used here and no offense to your coloring job cus you're EXCELLENT at it, but I think you need to learn about highlights to advance in this hobby. The fruits, the leaves, the alligator, all those things have nice smooth surfaces. They could do with some shine and more work. I know you said you did this for a reason, but I'm going contradict you lol. You don't want the picture to be JUST about the person. The main focus IS the woman in the middle of the photo, and when they see it, they go "Oh wow, that's pretty cool." Then there eyes will stray to the smaller details in the picture, the ones more blunt and think, "Oh wow... that's not as impressive. What happened?" Basically I'm saying you need to give em more to look at, eye candy is essential and you should know this XD
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yeah well you try to do this mother fucker in 2 weeks with 2 major assignments and being sick like half the time too
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You can be cool, you ask for critique. I give you critique. It was damned cool, and damned awesome. Never said "Do it nooowww!" They were just tips. I'm not about to compare anyways. Just uh, try not to bite my head off for it 
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pfft if only ppl knew half the things going on in my life. maybe then they wouldnt tell me to relax everyday.
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BTW: Forget to mention it twice lol, that pineapple kicked ass, and yeah I meant the actual one this time lol
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o.o pretty!! her anatomy is off a bit, but the face is sooo cute! The flowers look nice too! <3 OMG!!! and the monkey as adorable!!!! *steals the monkey* mwhahahaa
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hehe, I didnt draw the lineart. I only coloured it
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^________^ it's still great Gwenyver <3 I love the monkey!
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All in all not bad considering the amount of time you had to work on it. The girl, which is the main focus, is very nicely done. But I'd try to avoid shading with gradients, specifically on the watermelon and alligator. It could also use a few more shadows. With the sun so bright, things are surprisingly bright even when they'd be the shadow of something else.
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There's a watermelon?.. I didn't even know lol
And as to the plainer fruits/alligator, it's because its a fairly large picture. I didn't want areas too far off from the main focus to distract away from looking at her.
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And that makes sense.
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