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Published: 2010-11-05 20:00:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 11077; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 41
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yay i started a comic^^next: [link]
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love your art, keep going with the comic, so far so good! when will you be making more pages to this comic?
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i have the next page nearly done just the text is missing but... i am not happy with the pics when you look at the first and the last page you see that i don't realy like working on the pics 
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*nods* ye a typical wanna be leader *giggles*
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Woah...*phew* I almost mistook that stray for a fox. Beside the grammer error, I like the comic so far.
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thx when you see gramatic misstakes tell me which one so i can correct them^^ and well the stray fox wolf thingy is like the 2 others of his pack... different to all normaly canines xD
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The pictures are good, but the text sort of destroys this.
It's hard to get past the grammatical errors, and then the text is very small. Along with that, the speech bubbles are really messy and take away from the pictures themselves.
Also, in my opinion, the red words of the wolves in the second pannels are too distracting to the eye-- mainly because they are over the wolves themselves, but also because of their bright obnoxious colours (maybe white or something would work better)-- and then the same goes for the panel numbers which are unnecessary. Just tell people to go from left to right and they'll know what to do.
It's not terrible, but it definitely does need some work and edits-- keep it up!
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1. "Everybody need's something to fight for, Everyone must speak their mind!"
2. "We will do what we have to in order to Survive, Kill the bad ones! All others are bad!"
3. "They are no good, they eat our Meat! Let us survive, let us give them a piece of our minds!"
4. "Wow, did you say everyone must speak their mind?"
5. "Silence, Stray! You are not one of my pack, leave if you want to stay alive!"
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no problem, got one left now haha
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I like this, but the grammatical errors are a little hard to get past. I would revise and edit your speech bubbles! ^_^ Some of them just don't make sense, like, what does this one mean? "everybody need to stay for his mind" I that supposed to be, "Everybody speaks his mind?" o_O
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