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AresX-666 [2006-08-27 20:11:57 +0000 UTC]
great picture. probably your best
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Tiger-Prime [2006-06-28 08:30:36 +0000 UTC]
awesom epic once again
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Halfwing In reply to Tiger-Prime [2006-06-28 08:45:21 +0000 UTC]
I'm guessing it's a typo but... epic? lol gotta love typos sometimes. XD
And thank you very much!!
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Tiger-Prime In reply to Halfwing [2006-06-28 09:04:43 +0000 UTC]
yet that was a typo
it was meant to be nice pic
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Banana-of-Doom2000 [2006-06-07 22:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done! You're getting better fast.
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zarathus [2006-06-07 13:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! You've drawn the entire thing very well, and I particularly love how you've done the expression. Good work.
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Transryu In reply to Halfwing [2006-06-07 23:17:40 +0000 UTC]
A critique...*feels guilty when he gives critiques*
Well, the wings probably should be shorter or smaller (so they don't hit the ground) and maybe a little more spread out. The legs and arms are fine (the hands are better than I can do, lol), but now that I think about it, the torso probably should be alittle larger to match his legs or something. Other than that, it's pretty good, you're getting a lot better. ^_^
Oh, and don't feel bad about not being able to ink it and still show the flames, wings with flames are really hard to do with only lines.
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Transryu In reply to Halfwing [2006-06-08 14:41:38 +0000 UTC]
Yea, I figured that you ran out of room or something, I learned about that problem with wings the hard way myself, lol. What I do is I sketch out the pose of the creature, along with the wings, before I start adding any detail. That way I won't find out half way through the picture that the wings don't fit. That can end up having the picture look a little small though, so if you want the dragon/weredragon or whatever to take up more of the picture then you'll need to either fold the wings or let them get cut off on the sides(though that usually isn't a good thing).
Why do I feel guilty when giving a critique? Well, maybe that was the wrong word, but like you, I worry too much about what people think, lol. Which gets to the other thing I wanted to say: don't worry about how your art looks and stuff, just do your best and keep on improving. Not drawing or not posting your art because you think it looks bad will only hold you back. Lol, you should have seen the first picture I put on DA *shiver*, well, maybe not.
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