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HallelujahImSetFree — Pink and Blue

Published: 2011-08-21 19:33:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2563; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 9
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Description I'm no poet.
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Comments: 16

Koibito-chan [2011-10-15 06:10:05 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem~

The line I always remember is "gives boy a chance" ♥

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HallelujahImSetFree In reply to Koibito-chan [2011-10-15 17:03:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you so so much. I'm glad you love it.

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OvercaffeinatedSloth [2011-09-18 22:35:18 +0000 UTC]

But you have something to say? Then you're already above at least half the people on here who do call themselves poets.

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Styx-Strogoi [2011-09-09 18:15:07 +0000 UTC]

This made my day. Loved it. :3

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HallelujahImSetFree In reply to Styx-Strogoi [2011-09-09 18:40:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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Styx-Strogoi In reply to HallelujahImSetFree [2011-09-09 18:42:20 +0000 UTC]

But of course.

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gutpatrol [2011-08-24 01:41:51 +0000 UTC]

aah
this is so adorable ; u ;

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nappygoround [2011-08-22 04:41:45 +0000 UTC]

I love this to death

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HallelujahImSetFree In reply to nappygoround [2011-08-22 13:14:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks nappy (:

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TammiBlue [2011-08-22 04:40:58 +0000 UTC]

This is really good. I love the gradient too, because it really carries you along with the flow of the words. Nice job.

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HallelujahImSetFree In reply to TammiBlue [2011-08-22 13:14:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

I hoped it would work well

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ValleyOfTheDeranged [2011-08-21 21:08:24 +0000 UTC]

That was lovely ;u;

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HallelujahImSetFree In reply to ValleyOfTheDeranged [2011-08-22 13:13:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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aeris7dragon [2011-08-21 19:46:37 +0000 UTC]

I disagree with your description. XP I couldn't get words to rhyme if my life depended on it.

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HallelujahImSetFree In reply to aeris7dragon [2011-08-22 13:14:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm not the best either. some of my rhymes stretch it a little. -_-

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aeris7dragon In reply to HallelujahImSetFree [2011-08-22 17:53:23 +0000 UTC]

That's why my poetry never rhymes! XD

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