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Hamotilok — Part of her world- pg 3
Published: 2013-12-01 11:44:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 56917; Favourites: 238; Downloads: 195
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The boy was the original character of Thank you so much for the commission.
Please view from right to left.
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Comments: 7
I'm surprised nobody's noticed this yet; there's an error on this page. The subject's legs had started changing already in the previous page, but on the top-right panel they're completely normal. And the girl later on enters the room wearing slippers, so it's not her.
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I noticed that too. ^^ the girl who is wearing slippers came from the bathroom and she (Meyrin) appeared in page 7 and 8.
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Mhmm, indeed... so what I was referring to was, the guy's legs should be greened in that to-right panel, yeah? Or am I mistaken?
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the way you depicted him falling over is really visceral. I can almost feel it myself.
However, there are two coincidental typos on this page: you've missed the verb "get" in the first two speech bubbles.
They should be "I've got to get out of here" and "My legs are getting hard to move".
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Thank you very much for correcting the dialogues. I appreciate it.
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