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Deus-Lux [2013-07-01 13:57:41 +0000 UTC]
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Impact
The colour and lighting of this beautiful piece is heartwarming and pleasing to the eye. The character has a lovely look about her and her expression has a slight sadness, which makes her feel a lot deeper than one would expect.
There some things letting it down though, no much, but don't feel right in such a lovely piece. Despite there being a sense of movement to the image, it doesn't flow as it should. This is because of the movement of the clothes, hair and fabric.
When you're drawing a character in motion, remember that loose clothes and hair will follow the movement of the character unless another force stops this. Try and keep this in mind, I would recommend drawing arrows for the movement in the sketch to help you.
I would assume the character is spinning or moving her cloth outwards. So try having the hair and fabrics following her rather than going off on its own (references are a lovely thing to help with this, make some of your own if you want to).
The shading is bright and colour but soft, which is lovely and compliments the colours. It is even and in the right places, nothing wrong there.
I do believe the arms are long, for a rough guess of the right length try and remember that when you sit down and place your hands flat either side of you, your arms should be straight, that keeps it in proportion with the character.
The background is beautiful, it accompanies the character perfectly. The lighting and colours match but the upper clouds don't look complete. Try making them a little brighter because the sunlight is closer to them. And just a little preference on my side, try making sunlight paler and brighter, also make it more transparent. It will be more realistic that way.
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Duw [2014-11-19 13:04:24 +0000 UTC]
it really look so peaceful, so "light"
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haneiy In reply to Duw [2014-12-06 12:06:16 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^
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AuqaKissGrabbit [2013-09-09 12:32:41 +0000 UTC]
OMG this is VERY beautiful! <3
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jchau [2013-08-12 15:37:29 +0000 UTC]
Incredible beautiful!
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YouJustGotAnimated [2013-08-09 21:03:36 +0000 UTC]
The song and the movie made me cry T^T
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haneiy In reply to YouJustGotAnimated [2013-09-07 10:40:10 +0000 UTC]
I really want to watch the movie ;w; I always forget to, despite loving the song so much! the lyrics are beautiful
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InGodzHandz [2013-07-14 21:33:34 +0000 UTC]
She is beautiful.
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haneiy In reply to InGodzHandz [2013-09-07 10:55:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
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InGodzHandz In reply to haneiy [2014-02-01 22:20:31 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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Parii-Chan [2013-07-07 08:42:29 +0000 UTC]
woah!! nice alice-chan!!!!
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haneiy In reply to Parii-Chan [2013-09-07 10:56:02 +0000 UTC]
nyawwww pariiii arigatou pooo
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GrenadeslugBoss [2013-07-06 20:07:49 +0000 UTC]
What a great artwork!!!!!
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haneiy In reply to Luqura [2013-09-07 10:56:47 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
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takugirl [2013-07-05 14:42:32 +0000 UTC]
beautiful colours
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haneiy In reply to takugirl [2013-09-07 10:57:09 +0000 UTC]
thanks :')
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sidonie-chan [2013-07-05 10:51:51 +0000 UTC]
pretty! i love the expression in her eyes!
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haneiy In reply to sidonie-chan [2013-09-07 10:57:07 +0000 UTC]
arigatou sidonie-chann
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Interess [2013-07-05 05:55:39 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!! ^^
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haneiy In reply to Interess [2013-09-07 10:57:19 +0000 UTC]
thanks!!
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Interess In reply to haneiy [2013-09-09 02:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Anytime!! ^.^
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kocchimocchi [2013-07-02 14:15:12 +0000 UTC]
woahhh
the backgrounds really really pretty uwu
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rainbownote [2013-07-02 10:46:15 +0000 UTC]
I really love this so much, and I had a listen to that song too ;w; I'll have a go at critiquing again. I like the way that you drew and coloured the hair, it's really well shaded and I love how it flies out. I would've liked to see it a bit better behind the semi-transparent sleeve, and what I thin would work is when colouring the sleeve in that area, colour the part where it overlaps the hair on a different layer and reduce the opacity of that layer only. If that made sense. I like how you used different colours to shade the white of the dress and again, transparent sleeves look really good! I also like the relflected light on the red piece of clothing she holds onto, the folds are really well drawn too. In the corner where the sunlight shines in, I think you could do another layer where you blend it a bit and it lands onto the character, try setting the layer mode to overlay.
Overall it's just a really well drawn piece and I can see that it would've taken a long time... 24 hours, huh? sorry for the long paragraph and I hope this sort of helps |D <33
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Meema [2013-07-02 04:19:23 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work.
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haneiy In reply to Meema [2013-07-02 11:45:09 +0000 UTC]
arigatou >w<
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shijisai [2013-07-02 04:12:49 +0000 UTC]
woah, dat looks so pretty and da shading is absolutely beautiful~
this is a rlly beautiful and cool artwork~!
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haneiy In reply to shijisai [2013-07-02 11:45:02 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much!!!!!!!
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suppersona [2013-07-02 00:12:20 +0000 UTC]
woahhh it's beautiful ;w;
I love your shading style ^^
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haneiy In reply to suppersona [2013-07-02 11:44:50 +0000 UTC]
arigatouu!!! thanks so much~ I'm trying to work out more about lighting and I'm glad this one turned out alright
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Unrealyeto [2013-07-01 22:10:11 +0000 UTC]
nice color
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Glaxos [2013-07-01 19:41:37 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful!! *3*
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haneiy In reply to Glaxos [2013-07-02 11:34:20 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^
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Mehlyna [2013-07-01 18:33:36 +0000 UTC]
This is gorgeous!ā„
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haneiy In reply to Mehlyna [2013-07-02 06:56:28 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much ^^
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merelei [2013-07-01 13:34:54 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing, gorgeous and wonderfully done!
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haneiy In reply to merelei [2013-07-02 11:18:58 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much ^^
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