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pichu4850 [2009-03-24 02:38:08 +0000 UTC]
baaaw I love the serene expression he's got very very nice job on the hair, perfect and detailed and beautiful as always. good job on all the individual features of the face; you're very spot on with details and such like each individual eyebrow hair, the iris, the creases of the lips... just don't forget when you actually draw them out, the actual placing of where each feature goes. Let's see, in the past, I've noticed you have a tendency to draw the eyes pretty far apart and the mouths are often drawn pretty petit. In this picture, I think the mouth could have been made a little wider, as well as the eyes placed each a little more toward the center to be more proportional, but of course, everyone is different and the proportions that are generally known by people/artists are only averages.
even more so on proportion, the ear back there, I'm glad you included it as some people just like covering them up with hair. I think the ear could be made a little larger, given the size of the nose and ears generally around the same size as noses.
all in all i think you've come very strong in facial features studies (given how much detail and care you've put into them) and I say that now body studies are a plus 8D I would just suggest that you look a little more on proportion, the relationships of things to other things, etc. even if every kind of style warps a relationship (as do I) it's always good to know what's actually going on in the body.
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haneMIsaki In reply to pichu4850 [2009-03-27 01:18:41 +0000 UTC]
Woah thanks for the detailed critique *_* Ahh I should study face structure more and like you said, I can draw them as themselves alright, but I can't seem to place them. As for the mouth though, I tend to make them small because I've got an abnormally small mouth myself, and when I look at proportions... I'll work on that |D;;
I for one, love ears : D Love drawing them and their accessories xD But I didn't know they're the same size as the nose, that'll help : D
> < Thank you so much for the amazing comment *Q*
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haneMIsaki In reply to pichu4850 [2009-03-29 15:20:31 +0000 UTC]
One question though, how do you know where to place the eyes? I usually draw the shape of the face + ears, and match up the eyes that way but I don't think that works too well.
I love how math is involved with art though : D
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pichu4850 In reply to haneMIsaki [2009-03-29 15:54:38 +0000 UTC]
xD General guidelines for face proportions say that the eyes are the halfway point between the top of the head and the chin. Like here: [link]
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haneMIsaki In reply to pichu4850 [2009-03-29 16:22:55 +0000 UTC]
You're listening to Cassis by GazettE this second on msn 8D
Anywayssss
Oh thanks for the link : D! I think it's about time I really studied how to draw a face : P
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pichu4850 In reply to haneMIsaki [2009-03-30 23:59:12 +0000 UTC]
LOL Was I? xD I do remember listening to it while draiwng, though.
And no problem :3
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lol-cheese [2009-03-09 19:14:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow! It's really pretty!!!
I love the hair...so SHINY!!! @_@
PS-Are you still coming down for march break?
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haneMIsaki In reply to lol-cheese [2009-03-09 19:30:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you : D
And yupp I am~ I'll be there on the 13th :] We should hang~
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